Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 32

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The waves were high today, Apollonia thought, watching them beat against the pilings that made up the base of the Outpost Alexa.

The waves were high every day, she reminded herself ruefully.  Every single day on this planet looked like footage from some monstrous storm on Earth.

When it got really bad, when the winds racing a hundred or more knots came in, the waves towered like tsunamis.  Never quite reaching the outpost, but sometimes there was a warning to use only indoor corridors.

She imagined the outpost swayed at times, under those winds and waves, but Cenz himself had assured her;

“This rig and its pylons are constructed from some of the strongest carbon materials.  They can be used to make space elevators or towers that breach the atmosphere.  This rig will be the last thing to fall on this world, even after the mountains have crumbled.”

Among the pylons below, the porpishes were playing, jumping from one wave to another.  Sometimes they even looked up at her, seeming to beg for attention.

“Eh, I got Everett down to sleep,” Zey said, coming up next to her.  “What’re you looking at?  Oh, those things.  They’re creepy as hell, if you ask me.”

“The porpishes?”

“Is that what they’re called?”

“It’s what I call them,” Apollonia replied with a smile.

“Yeah, well, they need to mind their own business,” Zey said, glancing down at them critically.  They seemed even more excited now that two humans were looking down on them.

“They just want to play,” Apollonia said.  “I think we’re still new and neat to them.”

“Yeah, play with our dead bodies,” Zey replied.  “One researcher tried swimming with them early on, I heard.  They dragged him down and when they figured out he was using a rebreather they pulled it off him and he drowned.  Then they kept playing with the corpse.”

“That’s just a rumor,” Apollonia said.  Though, it was probably true.  “You said you got Everett to calm down?”

“Yeah.  Whatever that drug those !Xomyi gave him, it finally seems to be wearing off.  Man thought he was Tarzan.”

Apollonia laughed even though it wasn’t funny.  The young diplomat had been invited by the !Xomyi he’d been with to try some mystic drug in a ceremony.  It apparently hit humans far harder than !Xomyi.  After he’d taken it, he’d acted a complete fool, even eating a huge amount of their food.

It had overwhelmed the processor in his stomach, and since they’d brought him in he’d been vomiting and pooping almost constantly.  All the while, though, he was still trying to climb the walls.

It wasn’t the first time they’d seen it.  An advisory bulletin had been sent out, but there was a lot of difficulty; rejecting some sacred rite you were asked to partake in could ruin the trust that had been built.

Well, at least it had given her experience, Apollonia thought.  She’d never thought she’d have to clean a grown person’s butt, but now she felt like an old hand at it.

The first time had been the worst.  She’d only had to watch as Zey had worked.

“Don’t we have a drone that can do this?” she’d muttered.

“On the ship we have plenty.  But down here, we only have one soft arm.”

“Soft arm?”

Later, Zey had shown her the robot arm made of a soft, warm polymer that felt like human flesh.  “You don’t want something hard-edged going in sensitive places,” the nurse had told her.

Which made sense.  It made less sense not to be using it.

“You still need to learn,” Zey had said with a shrug.

“Sure, but then we can use the gummy arm, right?”

“You know what the gummy arm can’t do?” Zey asked.  “It can’t be a person.  Replacing the human element of health care – of most fields – is just something we don’t do.”

“Surely we could make robots that look and sound like us, though,” Apollonia had pointed out.

“Don’t get me started on that can of worms,” Zey had said.  “Now show me what you’ve learned.”

And so Apollonia had cleaned butts.

Now she was well experienced at it, and it hardly even seemed a big deal.

A long way to come, she thought.

“He’s probably going to have one hell of a hangover tomorrow,” she said out loud.

“Tomorrow he’s gonna wish he wasn’t alive,” Zey replied, sighing.  “Short of scrubbing all his blood and organs, we’ve done all we can for him.”

“Wow, we can do that?”

“Yeah.  Not assistant-grade stuff, but yeah,” Zey said.  “We have a portable internal scrubber here, but it’s only for serious cases.”

“Who would have thought that the !Xomyi have such primo shit?” Apollonia thought aloud.

“Pfft,” Zey replied, waving the idea away.

Apollonia let her gaze go to the mainland.

Zey was quiet, messing with her system, but after a while she leaned up next to Apple.

“You look like a love-sick puppy, looking out there,” she said.  “Is it Alisher?”

“Huh?” Apollonia asked, caught off-guard.  “Oh, no.  He’s great and all, I’m just . . . thinking about the mainland.  All those dinosaurs.”

“The not-dinosaurs that want to rip your face off and eat it,” Zey said.  “Not the handsome, dashing officer who clearly really likes you?”

“That’s right,” Apollonia replied, almost defensively.  Sure, Alisher was great, but dinosaurs . . . well, these ones were going to be gone soon!

“You two still having dinner on the regular?”

“Yeah,” Apollonia said.  “Last night.  I had some noodles . . .”

“Dark, you’re dating him and you’re thinking about the noodles?”

Apollonia watched Zey for a moment, feeling a gulf between them.  Food still rated as just one of the most important things to her mind.

Alisher was great, she thought.  So great that she kept telling herself he was great.

And he truly was.  He was kind, respectful, talented, funny . . .

Her thoughts drifted elsewhere.

“So imagine,” she said suddenly, forcing the topic to a subject she actually wanted.  “If I was out there.”

“Okay,” Zey replied warily.

“And I found a little adorable dinosaur.  Maybe it’s a baby.  Like, not a baby of something that’ll get huge.  And not like helpless.  But, you know, adorable.”

Zey narrowed her eyes.

“And it sees me, and it’s like ‘you’re my new mom’.  I’d have no choice but to take it in!  I mean, the whole world is doomed anyway, so what does it matter?  It’d be an act of mercy.”

Zey crossed her arms, one eyebrow going up.

“I’d name him Little Zey,” Apollonia said on a whim, loving Zey’s look of disbelief.  “And he’d be much smarter than we expected.  Like, nearly as smart as a person.  And my little buddy.”

Zey clicked her tongue, let out a long-suffering sigh, and turned away.  “This is what happens when I leave you alone.”

“He’d be a great sidekick!” Apollonia added.

A ding came on both of their systems.  It was an automated alert, telling them that Everett was up again.  And stuff was coming out of him.

“It’s my turn,” Apollonia said with a sigh, pushing off the railing.  “I’ll take care of it.”


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 31

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“Captain,” Kai’s voice came.  “You’re wandering.  Do you need some help?”

There was a pause before he answered.  “No,” he told her.

Kai sighed.  Brooks’s moodiness was always a factor, but being down here seemed to have made it worse.

“What’s going on?” she asked.

“I needed to take a walk,” Brooks replied shortly.  Then, after a pause he spoke again.  “Do you know where there might be red ochre around here?”

“What?”

“Iron-rich mud,” he said.

“Scanner drones have marked some out, actually.  The iron is detected easily from its magnetic resonance.  Why?”

“Just send me the location.”

“Should I go and be in contact with the !A!amo while you’re on your search?” she asked, letting a little exasperation through in her voice.

“That’s a good idea.  You should be spending time with them, too.  Just bear in mind that they’re upset from the death of Hard Biter.”

Kai considered that.  “Are you upset?” she asked.

“Yes,” he replied.  “Losing a friend hurts.”

A friend, she noted.

It was natural to get close to these people, she thought.  Necessary, even.  She hadn’t spent as much time with them as Brooks had, but she already got along with them.

What was going to happen, though, if when it was time to leave, the !A!amo refused to go?

She knew what it was like to lose your charges.  To lose your team.

All those years ago, she’d lost both.  It had been determined not to be her fault, she had made the correct calls.

It didn’t make it any easier to deal with, she thought.  She could tell herself that every night – for years she had done just that.

But it still hurt.

And she wondered if it would be the same here.

Discipline was a tool that needed to be kept honed, she reminded herself.

Shoving her self-pity away, she knew she could not let those shadows of the past dim the present.  Get too desperate to hold onto what was before you, you’d lose it even easier.

The !A!amo wouldn’t understand it if she became clingy.  She had to keep her focus on the mission at hand.

She rose, slinging her rifle across her back.  She’d set her drones to study every aspect of the attack by the Day Stalker.  They would be watching for them in the future with better results.

Next time, she would be ready, aimed and in position to pull the trigger on the thing before it hurt one of these people.


The !A!amo were gathered in a cluster around a tree.

The tree was near their camp, it was a short thing, its branches spreading out only three meters from the ground instead of the dozen or more from most of the tall trees of the jungle.  This made it special to the !A!amo.

At its base, a pit had been dug, the size and shape of a grave.

It was an empty, lonely hole, Brooks thought.

Long ago, humans had interred their own dead in graves like this.  There were few other options – cremation too difficult without a proper oven.  A sky burial – leaving the body exposed to the elements – was an option, but rarely chosen.

“Return to the Earth, old friend, wherever you are,” Knows the World said.

One of the women let out a howl, Young Mother.  She threw herself down, and with the motion flung a handful of small shells into the hole.

They were hundreds of kilometers from the coast, Brooks thought.  These shells must have been traded for from other groups and made their way here.  They were one of the few things besides food that was of value.

Now given to the dead.

Others threw their own gifts into the hole.  Some, carved stone heads for spears.  Others, leather bags or thongs.

It went around the circle, until it came to him.

The !A!amo watched him, pensively.  There was a tension.

He sensed Diver next to him stirring.  They did not know if he knew what to do, if he would partake, and it made them uneasy.

He stepped forward.

“I knew you a short time, Friend,” Brooks said.  “I give this, to remember you; the blood of the many animals you hunted.  May your spear ever bite deep.”

He threw the compacted sticks of red ochre into the hole.

There was a feeling of surprise through the group.  For a moment he feared he had done something taboo.  Perhaps red ochre was not for the dead?

But the moment passed, and in its wake, he sensed relief from the !Xomyi group.

Diver stepped up next, offering his own gift.

When they had come all the way around, back to Knows the World, there seemed an end to it.  Members of the group began to drift away, talking lightly – but most going back to mundane acts.

They felt it just as much as anyone else, he thought.  As much as a human or Dessei or Sepht mourned the death of a friend.

But life did not end with the death of someone else.  They still had to eat, to live.

Knows the World was the only one still near the grave.

Brooks approached him.

He saw Diver watching him, wondering again if it was best to just leave the wise man to his grieving.  But he had to take this chance.

Diver did not move to stop him.

“I am sorry for your loss,” he said to Knows the World.

The !Xomyi did not look up.  “I have had seven sons and two daughters.  I have laid five sons and one daughter to sleep in the earth.  All who died but this one never lived long enough to take their adult names.”

He shook his head.  “I once felt blessed with so many children, but now I feel it was a curse.  Losing them is hard and I hurt.”

Brooks was shocked at that death rate; six out of nine dead?

“No words are strong enough to match your loss,” Brooks said.  “But I say anyway that I feel sorrow for your pain.”

Knows the World’s head inclined slightly in acknowledgement.

“This son was not born to me but he became mine, my eldest son in whom I was very proud.  Now, he has gone to the Sky Child.  He gazes down on us and I hope he smiles.”

Brooks looked up at the moon.  It seemed still and harmless now.

“Sometimes danger comes from unexpected places,” Brooks said.

Knows the World peered at him, but said nothing in return.

“There may yet be dangers to come,” Brooks said.

“There are always dangers,” Knows the World said, almost puzzled.

“If something comes that threatens all your people,” Brooks said,  “I may be able to help.”

For a moment, he thought he had made an inroad.  Knows the World looked at him, and there was a hint of understanding in his eyes.

But then it closed off.  “I have lost too much today.  Thank you for your gift.  My son would have appreciated the red ochre, you did him great honor.”

He then closed his eyes, putting his arms and wings over his head.

Brooks knew the conversation was ended, and he turned away.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 30

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The !Xomyi were letting out long, lamenting cries.  Two of them had fallen to their knees, beating the Earth in some form of ritualized anger.

But the others were holding back another.

“I will save him!” Fast of Wing was screaming.  “I will save him!”

“He is gone!” Old Hunter told him.  “The keko!un wants you to follow so that it may take you as well.”

“I will kill it!” Fast of Wing shrieked.  “I will kill the beast that took my father!”

“There is nothing to be done,” Old Hunter said with finality.  “If you wish your line to die – then go.  Your father is with the Sky Child.  He will not thank you when you go to him too soon.”

Fast of Wing let out a sound of anger and turned away.

“That was a keko!un?” Brooks asked.

Diver turned to him, but then looked back warily.  “It was.  It has taken one of the best among us.  It wounds us deeply.”

Tracker did not take his eyes away from the jungle.  “It is not alone,” he declared.  “There are others.  They wait.  For us to make a mistake, to take our eyes away.  We cannot stay.”

Brooks looked out.  He saw nothing, and his drones saw nothing.  But that animal was small enough to get close to them before being detected.  If he pushed out their radius, they might slip through entirely unseen.

He didn’t think he had enough with him.

Looking down at his hand, he still held the pistol, though it shook in his grip.  Slowly, he put it away.

“Y,” he said.  “I need you.”

The drone appeared.  “Yes, Captain?  I can assist you.”

“A predator just took one of my group,” he said.  “Can you recover the body?”

Y must have assimilated all the drone data, as he immediately replied; “The body is severely damaged, and was already being consumed before the animal left sensor range.  Are you certain you wish to do this?  I do not believe the !Xomyi will thank you – they will be disturbed by the damage to the body.”

Brooks wanted to yell yes, of course Y should recover it.  But he had a point.  A mauled corpse would be a horror for his son to see, and if they took it with them, it would give the keko!un a reason to follow them back to their camp.

“We must go,” Old Hunter declared.  “The he!ak’s meat is tainted.”  He turned, walking back towards the base of the hill where Brooks had been left waiting before the hunt.

Brooks understood.  It was not that the meat was truly tainted, but to save their own lives they would have to leave it to the keko!un now.  If they stayed, they risked more members being picked off.  If they left it . . . the keko!un would not follow, as it would have the kill to itself.

“This is an ill-omened day,” Old Hunter added.

Brooks was startled by that, and his eyes went to the moon, which his people had dubbed Omen.

It was still there, as it always was.  The glow around it was ominous.

How soon, he wondered.  How soon until it comes down and kills he!ak, keko!un, and !Xomyi all?

As Old Hunter left, the others slowly moved to follow.  Tracker stayed.  “I will watch,” he said.

When he noticed that Brooks was tarrying, he waved.  “I will be safe.  Go with the others.  Stay close, my friend.”

Brooks nodded, fingering the grip on his pistol.  The whole attack had been so fast that he couldn’t get there soon enough to help.  If it had come for him, he wasn’t sure if he could have even gotten his weapon out in time.  Not without drone warning to be ready.

“Kai,” he messaged.  “Where are you?”

“A few hundred meters out, still.  You all right?”

“Yes,” he told her, his voice grim.  “I want you to head back – and be alert.  There are large predators about.  I don’t want to lose anyone else today.”


The keko!un did not follow them on their return.

“They will come eventually,” Old Hunter told him.

That was the extent of conversation on the trip back.  The group was grim, even Tracker did not make jokes or laugh.  Brooks saw little of him, nor Fast of Wing, who he suspected Tracker was keeping an eye on.

By dawn they had arrived back at camp.  Already, the women of the camp knew; Brooks was surprised until he saw that Fast of Wing and Tracker had preceded the main group.

The group of men entered the village in a solemn, formalized way.  Standing apart from the group was Knows the World, who had his head bent, folded under his wings.

Brooks felt he was supposed to be a part of this, he wanted to be.  But he was not sure what role to take.  He simply moved with the men, staying just behind them, and tilting his head down.

The women were letting out a high wailing, throwing handfuls of dirt into the air.  The men moved among them, and Brooks could not tell if this was ritual or simply them wanting to be with their dear ones.

Fast of Wing and Tracker went to Knows the World and formed a circle with him, all of their heads down.

Old Hunter eyed Brooks.  He, too, was standing apart.

“They mourn as family,” he said.

“They were related?” Brooks asked.

“Knows the World was the father to Hard Biter.  Tracker was his younger sibling.  And you know that Fast of Wing was his son.”

Off to the side, three of the women had formed a similar group, keening together.  Old Mother was one of the group, along with Young Mother, wife of Tracker.  The third he only knew from his system identifying her, as High Spirit.

A child joined them, who his system told him was Causes Trouble.  The girl seemed to be in a stunned silence as she held onto Old Mother’s leg.

“There is no body for us to bury,” Old Hunter said.  “I must still make a remembrance of my friend.”  He shook his head.  “It is not right I should admit this to an outsider, No Wings, but I am shamed.”

Brooks found the fact that he confided in him a positive sign, though he hated the situation that had brought it on.  “You have done nothing wrong.”

“I was the eldest on the hunt.  It was my task to protect the others,” Old Hunter said.  “I should have known the keko!un was there.  But I took too much pride in my friend’s prowess.”

“They are clever,” Brooks said.  “And they plan.  You did all you could.  Sometimes you can do everything right and still disaster happens.”

Old Hunter regarded him a moment, then nodded.  He moved away, towards his shelter.

Brooks considered what he should do.  There were many possible ways to honor the dead hunter, a being whose life he had hoped to save.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 29

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Night had fallen.

The hunting party and Brooks were still out; this was unusual, but Diver assured him that in a group they were fine and this was something they did often.

He!ak are best hunted at night,” he said.  “They are sluggish then.”

Brooks was slightly confused, as he had thought they were hunting hamomo.  But the two names might be cognate; he suspected that they were hamomo in normal speech, but the name he!ak was used when hunting them.  The precise rules, though, were unclear.

There was a troop of creatures on the ridge itself, about thirty of them, which were alert to their presence.  They remained silent but watched the !A!amo carefully.  They looked similar to the !Xomyi in some ways, smaller in size, about as large as a mid-size Earth monkey.  Their heads were smaller, but their snouts longer.

Distant relatives, maybe, Brooks thought.  Like baboons were to humans.

!Kos will be quiet,” Diver said.  “Unless we threaten them.”

“We will kill them if they interfere with our hunt of the he!ak,” Hard Biter promised.  Brooks could believe that he would, too.

They crept to a lower edge of the ridge to look down on the he!ak.

The creatures were larger than Brooks expected.  There were ten to fifteen of them, large animals that had short trunk-like snouts and bulbous bodies.

The largest probably weighed several tons.  They would provide a huge amount of meat for the clan.

They’ll eat like kings if they can pull this off, Brooks thought.

But looking at the !A!amo, he wasn’t sure how they could realistically do it.  Yes, humans had hunted mammoths in ancient times, but the !Xomyi were far smaller than a human.  They had only spears and blowguns.  Unless the poisons in those darts was spectacularly powerful, he wasn’t sure if they could fatally injure a creature this big.

The herd was also alert, despite the darkness.  The !A!amo seemed to have no trouble seeing in the dark, reminding him again that they had evolved from nocturnal creatures, slowly moving towards being diurnal.

Their ancestors, living in trees, had gained much safety from foraging at night.  But on the ground, it only increased their vulnerability to larger predators.

Diver turned to him.  “We move now to hunt.  When we kill, we must remain cautious.  Large beasts will come, drawn to the smell of blood.”

Brooks nodded.  “I’ll be ready.”

Amazing, he thought, that they had survived in a world of giants.

On some level, he wasn’t sure that he could.  Would his pistol be enough protection against one of the Tyrannosaur-sized carnivores?  The drones kept them at bay most of the time, but it was likely that the lure of food would be enough to make them power through.

“Kai,” he radioed.  “Are you nearby?”

“I’m trailing back about a kilometer.  Do you need help?”

“Not presently.  But something big might come this way if there’s a kill.  Can you move closer safely?”

“I’ll be there shortly,” she replied.

“But safely?” Brooks asked.

She sighed.  “I’m monitoring the drones.  I’ll be safe.”

“Don’t hurry.  Your priority is to keep yourself alive.”

“My priority is to keep you alive, sir.”

“We differ in that.  But I outrank you, and your life comes first.  Things haven’t started yet, so there’s still time, I think.”

“Copy,” Kai replied.  She was not happy.

The !A!amo began down the hill, towards the herd.  Diver stayed with Brooks, taking more care now to help show him the best way to move without making too much sound.

“Your feet are big and clumpy,” Diver said, making clump, clump sounds with motions of plodding.  “You must walk with more softness.”

Brooks considered, then took off his space boots.  He’d worn the boots for the long-distance travel, but now he needed stealth.

He was still louder than Diver, but the soft leather moccasins helped a lot.

“Do they need you?” he asked Diver.

“Yes.  You remain here.”  Diver disappeared in an instant, with very little sound.  Brooks felt humbled by just how much he’d been holding the !Xomyi back.

The position he’d been left in, still partially on the slope down to the lower area where the herd was resting, gave him a nice view of the clearing.  But the !A!amo were impossible to see.  Shifting his vision through different modes, even in infrared he could see only small spots that might have been the hunters, though there were so many from small life forms that it was hard to be sure.

His spy drones were the only way he could keep tabs on them.  The !A!amo were incredibly stealthy; their lives depended on this, after all.

His system created a filter, seeking signals that only matched the size of each member of the !A!amo party, and in a second he had their exact positions.

A part of him felt a strange guilt, using such high technology to spy on them when they went through all this effort.  His technology rendered their skill meaningless, and the gulf between their people and his had never felt wider.

The !A!amo spread out in the jungle, forming a crescent shape.  Diver was separate from the others.

Brooks kept the top-down view from the drones and added the data to his visual system, highlighting the position of the hunters in the real world.

They were inching closer, communicating with a bird whistle that did not seem to be noticed by the he!ak.

But then something spooked them.  One member of the herd let out a loud snorting cry, and the wake ones all turned, crying as well.  The sleeping members all started to rouse.

A light came from the forest, and Good Hunter emerged, carrying in each hand a torch.  Brooks wondered for a moment how he’d made it so quickly, then remembered that the higher oxygen content of Ko’s atmosphere made it far easier to start a fire.

Good Hunter was yelling, twirling as if in a trance, swinging the torches in a way that seemed wild yet must have been very controlled.

The he!ak began to make a deep, gurgling cry, some moving towards Good Hunter, others moving away.

The !Xomyi was in a dangerous position, drawing their attention, the he!ak could charge him and run him down without much chance to survive.  But they seemed to fear the torches, and even the largest of them were starting to move away.  Yet at the same time, they seem entranced in a way that was more than watching a predator.  Perhaps this was exploiting some aspect of their behavior or mind?  Thousands of years of living alongside the he!ak had surely taught the !A!amo secrets of the creatures.

Then, from the forest, the hunters emerged.  A dart came in, making a horrible howling as it flew.  Unlike most of the spears Brooks had seen, this one had some objects attached to it, hanging by leather thongs.  They must have been pierced in a way that the air rushing through them as they flew caused the sound.

Panic gripped the he!ak, and some began to run into the jungle.  More darts flew in among them, not seeming to be aimed to wound, but to frighten and break up the group.

As most of the he!ak made their escape, a smaller one was cut from the herd.  It was still probably a ton in weight, but it was slower than the others, one leg perhaps lame.

More screaming darts came in, in front of the lame he!ak.  It came to a halt, changing its direction – and leaving its flank open.

More darts flashed out of the jungle, this time true hunting darts.  Three hit the he!ak, one skidding off its top flank, two hitting in the body.  One fell out, leaving a wound that gushed a light-colored blood.  The other struck just below where Brooks thought the shoulder girdle would be.  It went deep, the shaft falling out while leaving the head in.

The he!ak let out a wounded cry, and the herd ahead started to turn, but more screaming darts sent their way kept them running.  They stampeded into the jungle, the volume of their flight seeming all the worse for it being night.

The wounded animal was limping along, but a huge stream of pale blood was coming from its flank.

It had been speared through the heart, Brooks realized.  Or whatever its alien equivalent was.

The other darts had done only a little damage.  But this one, precisely placed, would bring down a creature that weighed dozens of times as much as the one who cast it.

For a time it continued to try and flee, making its way towards the jungle, in the path carved by its kin.  Much had been trampled, leaving the area almost barren.  It stopped to regain its strength, its sides heaving with breath.

One !Xomyi emerged from the jungle, approaching the wounded beast.  From this distance, it was hard to tell who, but Brooks thought it was Hard Biter.

He held a heavy spear, and he came close to the he!ak.  It saw him and tried to move, but sank down onto its belly.

Hard Biter thrust the spear into its neck, just at the base of the skull.  The he!ak let out one last cry, and rolled over onto its side, its legs finally going still.

The hunters came out.  Hard Biter climbed the he!ak, pulling his spear from its head and hefting it up.  The power of the moment still burned in him.

The others raised a clamor, hefting their spears.  Diver came over, his torches burned low, and let out a triumphant cry.

An alert came on his system.  Something big was approaching.

The !Xomyi were outside of his sphere of drones, he realized.  Whatever it was, it was already on them.

“Hey!” he called, raising a hand.  “Something’s coming!”

The !Xomyi heard his call, but did not seem to understand.  They raised their spears to him in victory, happiness on their faces.

It turned to terror as a huge animal came from the forest.

It moved with stunning speed, enough that Brooks barely had time to register it.  It was big – bigger than a human, almost like a bear, but long and lean.  It did not roar or stop to threaten like every predator in every low-budget film.

The !A!amo saw it too late.  Then it was on Hard Biter.

The !Xomyi screamed, a sound of pain and shock.  But the creature’s fangs had already sunk into his head.  Its long, knife-like canines pierced into his skull through his eye sockets.

His spear dropped from his hands and he reached up, clawing at its face, but to no avail.

The other !Xomyi were screaming as well, in shock which quickly turned to rage.  They thrust with their spears, but the attacks were not well-aimed, and they did nothing but glance off the creature’s fur.

It was like a bipedal cat, almost, Brooks thought.  But its face was more reptilian than that; like a dinosaur.  It lacked the features that !Xomyi and humans shared, and the thought came to him unbidden; it had no face, and so did not have a soul.

It backed up but let out a high shriek around its prey.  Hard Biter’s movements had gone more feeble.

Brooks realized that his feet had taken him on a run down there.  He was panting for breath, crashing through the underbrush like a wildman.  He had drawn his sidearm.

He came stumbling out, but the giant animal had pulled Hard Biter back with it, to the edge of the jungle.  It gave a hard shake of its head, and the !Xomyi moved no more.

The others were edging forward, throwing some spears at it, but it waved a paw and knocked them aside.

It saw Brooks approaching, an unknown element, and it made eye contact with him.

There was intelligence in its eyes, he realized.  It was studying him.

It moved back, into the jungle, and was gone.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 28

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The cry of a bird-like creature, a ko!go, came from thirty yards away.

It was not actually the animal making it, though the sound was perfectly identical to his ears.  It was one of the !A!amo hunters.

Then there was a crashing through the undergrowth.  It lasted only a few seconds, and then a triumphant call came.

“We can move up,” Diver told him.

“What was it?” Brooks asked.

“Small prey,” Diver replied.

They came closer, to find the other hunters gathered around a creature only about a meter long.

It looked like a large lizard, with short, bristly feathers down its back.  It was mostly tail, which was very thin.

“Poor kill,” Hard Biter said, sounding annoyed.  “Little meat.  Usually their tails are fat!”

Tracker laughed and acted out a creature grunting in exertion as it dragged a huge tail, making a little snuffling noise with it.

The others laughed, and started butchering the lizard.

Brooks was glad he had asked if he could come on this hunt.  They hadn’t seemed to mind, but Diver had been with him the whole time – as his guide and caretaker, Brooks thought.

He couldn’t really mind.  He was not good at going through the jungle like they were, and unless he used a gun he was not going to be a skilled hunter.

“You don’t even have a spear,” Hard Biter had said as they had started out.

“I don’t need one,” he said.

The thought had occured to him to use a gun and help them hunt.  But he’d decided it was best not to use his sidearm unless he had no other choice.

The !A!amo had yet to be exposed to that.  He did not know how they would react – it was possible the fear it instilled could lead them further into thinking he was something supernatural, or it could drive them away.

The lizard was quickly butchered, split into two loads that Hard Biter and Diver split between them.

They continued on, seeking nothing in particular.  A small bird was caught, as well as another lizard, a different kind.  It bit onto Tracker’s finger and refused to let go, which they all found very amusing.  Even after he cut the head off it kept holding onto his finger.

Brooks’s medical drone hovered up near him.  The !A!amo regarded the drone with some fear and made some distance between themselves and him as it appeared.

“Captain,” it said.  It was Y’s voice.  “It may interest you to know that there is a nest of honey-producing hive animals near your location.”

“How do you know?  Are you monitoring for that?”

“I had some idle time,” Y said.  “And !Xomyi seem to universally value honey.”

“Thanks for letting me know.”

The drone zipped away and Diver cautiously came closer.  “What did the spirit say to you?”

“Nothing of importance,” Brooks said, squinting to look in the distance.  “What’s that?” he asked, pointing.

Diver looked in the direction.  “I see nothing.”

“I saw something moving in that tree,” Brooks said.

Diver looked more carefully, alert.  Then he sucked in a breath.

He went over, calling out to the others, and went up the tree.

When he had confirmed that the honey nest was there, the others lit up.  They worked quickly, starting a fire, creating a small, smoky torch, which they passed up.  Honey Finder went up, taking the lead now.

Smoke to dull the senses of the creatures, Brooks thought.  Just how humans had done it on Earth.

It was the same logic; smoke was toxic and an irritant.  Its byproducts were not useful to life like theirs.  The bee-like creatures would be stunned, allowing the taking of their honey.

At least some of it.  Most likely they’d not pilfer the whole nest, to leave the colony intact so it could be found again later.

The honey came down, chunks of it taken into hands and hence into mouths.

By the time Diver and Honey Finder came down, every other member of the group was feasting.

“Take!” Honey Finder said, offering him a piece.

This time he didn’t feel he could say no.  He took the piece and looked at it.  It looked superficially like an earthly beehive, but larger, and the wax was slightly green.  There were numerous grubs in it, not even many cells filled with honey.

He took a bite.  It tasted bitter to him, with hints of sweetness and that odd mintiness, but he chewed anyway.

Honey Finder and Diver watched him eat, then cheered.

“I told Honey Finder of your sharp eyes,” Diver said.

“Me?  You found the nest,” Brooks said.

Diver considered him.  Brooks could see the intelligence behind his eyes working.

Brooks could have just found it miraculously, as he had with the scanner and tubers.

But he wasn’t here to be a hero.  He was here to win their trust.

“You are humble,” Diver said.  “And a good friend.”


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 27

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“You frown too much, No Wings,” Diver prodded Brooks.

Brooks was crouched, looking out through a gap in leaves at some sort of beast that the !A!amo hunters were investigating.

Brooks looked to him.  Basic human expressions seemed to be taken as serious by the !Xomyi, and their smiles were different.  He tried to emulate the expression of happiness they used.

“Better,” Diver told him.

“I am just a serious person,” Brooks replied.  “Usually.”

“Ah, well serious attitudes are no good on a hunt,” Diver replied.  “Joy is better.  Laughter is best.  Just not when you are near your prey!”

“Is that prey?” Brooks asked, gesturing to the creature out beyond.

It had six legs, moving in an undulating motion for a short distance, then stopping.

Terrestrial life on the planet was strange.  On Earth, all macro lifeforms on land descended from a single ancestor, a fish with a backbone and four limbs.  Everything descended from that ancestor shared those same qualities.

But on Ko, there seemed to be several lineages among large terrestrial life.  The !Xomyi came from a group that had four limbs, similar to Earth.  But there were two other lineages, that had six legs each.  Some had convergently evolved in a way much like archosaurs on Earth; crocodilians, dinosaurs, and birds.  He’d seen the dinosaur-like creatures, both large and small.  Some had feathers, others leathery skin and scutes.

Then there were the ones like this; they were simpler lifeforms, with soft leathery skin, and little intelligence – and six limbs.

It stood to reason they shared a common ancestor with the more complex reptilian/avian creatures, but they must have split long, long ago, and continued to hold their own in the world.

“This?  Food?”  Diver dismissed the idea.  “Tastes very bad!  Sometimes we eat, when we’re very hungry.  But it is hard to take the bad taste out.  Eat too much, and . . .”  He mimed vomiting, then staggering about, pretending to fall at the last moment in death.

Poisonous!  That was interesting, Brooks thought.  It suddenly made sense; just by being poor eating, they could compete with the far more complex and intelligent life.

“What do you call it?” Brooks asked.

Diver shrugged.  “Go!em,” he said.

Brooks had heard that word before.  It translated in his ear into “bad food”.  “Bad food, that is all you know them as?”

“Big bad food,” Diver said.  He pointed to a slug-like creature on the side of a tree near them.  “Little bad food.  We can’t eat it, so why care?  It doesn’t bother us.  Sometimes we use their blood for poison.  But too much makes food taste bad.”

Brooks looked back out; Hard Biter was approaching the go!em, a handful of darts in his hand.

He came closer to the thing, and his hand shot out, stabbing them into one of the legs of the creature.

Its huge head, a simple thing with just a spherical mouth and tiny eyes, swung around.

Just as quickly, Hard Biter pulled the darts out and ran back into the undergrowth.

The head of the go!em finally had turned enough to see, and its flank shivered.  Not a movement of fear, but contained strength; the creature was at least three meters tall at the hip, and it clearly had an enormous amount of muscle mass in its body.

Seeing nothing, though, it seemed to forget the issue, its head moving back forward.  It took another rippling step forward, and its head began to swing up into the trees, eating fruit that hung from them.

“See?  Not even scary,” Diver said with a shrug.

He began to walk away, and Brooks followed.  “So it is go!em, and so is that tree slug.  Is old food go!em?”

“Yes,” Diver said.  “And you know what else is go!em?”

“Me,” Brooks ventured.

Diver laughed.  “Yes!  You do not smell nice to us.  You are lucky, we are very good hunters!”  The words were playful, and Brooks had the feeling that Diver was doing this to see how he reacted.

“Your names are interesting,” he said.

“Our names tell what is important,” Diver said.

“You are Diver.  Do you dive?”

“Once,” Diver said.  “When I was young I hunted a big slippery fish from the river.  I held my father’s spear like this.”  He pressed it to his chest, pointing straight up.  “And I dove into the water.  I speared the huge fish!  It was bigger than me, but I pulled it from the river and we ate very well.”

“Interesting,” Brooks said.  “What were you called before that?”

“Loves Food!” Diver said quickly, amused.  “It is why I thought to dive in after the fish, it looked tasty.”  He laughed.  “Sometimes I am still called Loves Food Diver!  We do not ever lose our names, they are part of telling our story.  Only when we die do we lose our names and go live in the moon.”

“What’s it like on the moon?” Brooks asked.

The !A!amo look scandalized.  “I do not know, I am Loves Food Diver, I am still alive!”

“I meant no offense,” Brooks said.

Diver waved it away.  “You meant no offense, No Wings.  I do not hold it against you.”


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 26

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Brooks had found it best to sit out of the way.

The !A!amo camp was a sort of decentralized chaos when everyone was present, with members going about whatever business they needed to do on their own prerogative.  When it came to a group task, their neighbors simply helped; in turn, they would be helped when they needed it.

When he’d sat near the center of their collective huts, he often found himself in the way of various activities.

None of them made a comment; they didn’t even seem annoyed as he blundered like the giant he was in comparison.  They just worked around him, and when he moved they took over the space he’d made available.

He’d wanted to help, but they often told him he need not bother.  He lacked the necessary skills for anything except carrying heavy objects, anyway.

So there was no score-keeping, for either him or amongst their group, but there were still the unbreakable limits of their technology.  Food was the primary resource they valued, because of biological necessity.  They shared, and their children were fed first, which he was glad to see.

For many animals, it was simply a calculation of investment, and they would leave their young if the danger was too severe.  After all, dead parents would mean the young died, whereas living parents could always make more babies.

But sapient beings tended not to do that.  Some might; but it was common for parents to sacrifice much to give their children all they could.

It also bespoke a strong amount of expectation in the group.  If parents died, leaving children behind, the others could take them in.

He did not see that here, yet, but there was data on it from other !Xomyi groups.  He fully expected it would be the case here.

The men had been busy preparing for the hunt, he noticed.  They’d huddled together last night, in a sort of ritual that he did not rightly feel he could put himself into yet.  Knows the World had led them in a chant, mimicking a hunter, while another had dressed as an animal.

He presumed it represented the hamomo they wanted to kill.

He could understand, in a sense.  They were acting out what they wanted to happen, impressing the idea into their own minds – and perhaps hoping to impress it onto the world itself.

While he had not been in their ritual, he was going to ask if he could go with them today.  At least to observe.

It could be dangerous – not only for the wild animals, but the risk of angry hunters turning on him if they could not find anything.  It was always possible the !Xomyi might look to him and think he could be food, or just blame him for bringing some sort of ill-fortune.

That intellectual possibility was in his mind, but he did not believe it.  Cannibalism could always occur in any population, but they still were unsure if he was even mortal like they were, no matter how often he said he was not a spirit.

Tracker’s hut was nearest to him.  He stepped over, leaning around the side.

“I would like to come on the hunt,” he told Tracker, who had a pile of darts, each about half a meter long, in front of him.  He had been examining them, picking which he wanted to bring.

He looked up at Brooks as he spoke, though.  “Ask Hard Biter.”

“Is he a hunt leader?” Brooks asked, unsure if such a hierarchy even existed.

Tracker seemed confused by the question.  “He was the first to speak of the hunt.”

“You were the first to speak to me of it, yesterday.  Are you all right with me going?”

Tracker shrugged, seeming indifferent, but smiled a moment later.  “You may come, spirit,” he said, his voice teasing.

Brooks smiled back.

“I will talk to Hard Biter, too,” he said.

He went over, finding that Hard Biter was with his family.  He did not know if the !Xomyi really had a concept like marriage, but they did take partners in a similar fashion.  Hard Biter’s wife had died some years ago, he’d learned.  Her name was taboo to speak; speaking of the dead other than through their relation to you, such as father, mother, son, or friend, was not acceptable.

Hard Biter himself was an outsider who had come into the group, the woman he married one of the daughters of Knows the World and Old Mother.

They were not with him now, just his two children; Fast of Wing, a fiery young man, and Causes Trouble, a child he’d guess was equivalent to a human eight-year old.

Brooks made sure that his approach was noticed – how could it not when he was so big? – and stood silently, waiting for Hard Biter to accept his unspoken request for words.

Looking at him, Hard Biter opened his arms slightly, a welcoming gesture.

“I would like to go with you on the hunt,” Brooks said.

Hard Biter considered a few moments.  “All right,” he said.  “Wait.  And we will come for you when we are ready.”

Brooks nodded, and Hard Biter turned away.

Well, that was it, Brooks thought.

He went back to the edge of the camp, prepared himself as best he could, and waited.

The hunters gathered not long after.  They spoke softly to each other, huddled in a circle.  Once, Tracker peered over at him in a way that seemed ominous.

Brooks wondered if there was an argument over his coming.

They broke up, and began to come towards him as a group.

Hard Biter stepped up towards him.  He had a bag.

“No Wings, you have not hunted before,” he said, his voice raised.

Brooks prepared to defend his ability in words, but Hard Biter stepped closer, pushing the bag into his hands.  “You cannot hunt without this.  It is very important.”

There was great expectation from the others.  Brooks found his heart beating, and he opened the bag carefully.

Inside was a pot.  It was painted, decorated nicely.  Was the object in it?

He started to draw it out.

“This pot holds our hopes for good hunt,” Hard Biter said.  “Protect it!”

Brooks nodded solemnly, wracking his brain for comparable rituals in human or known alien cultures.  Was he supposed to bring the pot with him?  Or stay here, and by holding it he would ritualistically be a part of the hunt?

It was a tight fit out of the bag, and he grasped the lip, pulling.

The pot broke.

It cracked apart completely, not just into two pieces, or a chip coming off, but fairly disintegrated.

His jaw dropped in horror – and then the laughter began.

The troop of men were howling, holding their bellies and turning away, Diver even bending over as if short of breath.

“Ah, silly spirit, you are always fooled by a pot!” Hard Biter said, his normally serious face split in great amusement.

Brooks was still in shock, not in horror now, but only by how well they had fooled them.

This pot had no value, he realized.  It was an old piece of broken junk.

It hit him that all this time, he had been watching them, they had also been watching him.  They had seen the seriousness he treated them with; treated everything with.

And so they had punked him good.

Tracker slapped him on the arm, a comradely gesture they shared with humanity.  “Come, come, No Wings, now it is time to hunt!”


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 25

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The sun beat down like a physical force, and even with his coolsuit, Urle felt overheated.

The ambient air temperature was just shy of 66, and there was no shade in this region.

It would have been called a savannah on Earth, and in some ways it looked similar.  But there were differences.

The craggy trees were actually some kind of hard-skinned mushroom, whose mycelium spread out through the earth for tens of meters around them, sucking up every molecule of water they could find.

It made digging up the dirt difficult; the dense web of mycelium served to pack the earth tight.

If not for the large burrowing creatures that looked like hairy mole crickets, the soil might have turned into a dead hardpan.

But nature provided, and life created the conditions for yet more life.

Where the numerous mole bugs churned up the earth, sprung up the seedgrasses.

Around him, the Hessa, the !Xomyi who lived here, continued to labor.

They all wore light clothing, just a basic poncho woven from the stiffening fibers inside the grass.  On their heads were very large hats, almost comically so, their brims extending far to give each person their own shade.

I should have accepted when they offered me one, he thought.  The Hessa had offered many gifts, and he had not wanted to intrude on their hospitality too much.  Perhaps they’d show him how to make one.  It couldn’t hurt to have a little shade.

They’d spent all morning cutting down seedgrass.  It grew wildly in clumps wherever there was heavy mole bug activity.  What drew them to certain spots, Urle did not know.  He may have to ask about that, too.

He’d never scythed before, and he was impressed with the skill with which they’d made their scythes; curved sticks with neat flecks of flint inset, their edges incredibly sharp.  The trees here were very hard, much harder than on Earth, and the tools broke often.  When the flint chips broke, one could just pull them out and put in a new one.

One of his had broken, and he yanked it out.  One of the Hessa watched him.

“Do not get cut,” the woman said.  “The edges are sharp.”

It was his metal hand.  “Thank you, I’m fine,” he said.  Reaching into a pocket on his belt, he found a well-sized piece of flint and then fitted it in.

His pack was larger than the others, and already nearly full.

He stopped, taking a handful of seedgrass stems, and cutting them with his tool.  Seeds sprinkled from the top with each movement.

The cycle of life continued, he thought.

The Hessa did not sow any seeds themselves.  The seedgrasses were all naturally occurring, the conditions here were simply perfect for them to spread.

It seemed almost too convenient, but he knew his history; this was how agriculture had begun on Earth, too.

His basket was packed full, and the sound of a blowing horn came from the direction of the village itself.

“Ah, finally!” the Hessa woman near him said.  “The sun was getting very high!”

Near noon, when the heat got to its worst, even too much for the !Xomyi, they came into the shade to rest in the village.

He wasn’t sure if it really qualified as a village or not, to be honest.  It was a collection of huts, one collective longhouse and a storehouse.  There was one other building, whose function he was not clear on.  It was not spoken of much, and they seemed protective of it.  He guessed it may be some sort of temple or holy site.

He only really saw Hessa near it when some cleaning needed to be done.

There was no true leader, but people knew the roles that needed to be done and seemed to take on tasks for themselves or the group very naturally.

Yet he could see how signs of social class had already begun.  Some people gravitated towards the roles of guidance or even speaking to spirits.

They followed in the footsteps of parents, and the others accorded them with great respect.

The man who had blown the horn was one such figure; the Hornblower was both his name and title, and he was the only one who ever blew the horn.  Whether it was taboo or not for others to do so, Urle didn’t know.

One day, he thought, Hornblower might be the title of the hereditary ruler.  Or perhaps even a religious title, the Hessa attributing to horns a spiritual power.

They filtered back into the village, which had no name, dropping off their packs in the central long house.  Most would retire then to their private huts for a rest, before the grueling work of threshing and grinding the seeds began.

Urle lingered in the longhouse.  In here was the wise woman, Ukn!aa.  Her daughters, whose names were simply First Daughter, Second Daughter, and Third Daughter, were emptying the baskets, spreading the stalks out on the floor.

Ukn!aa walked among them, shaking a rattle over them.  Her eyes were nearly closed, as she contemplated the spirits for portents.

Urle kept a respectful silence, hoping his presence was not rude.  No one had commented, at least.

Hornblower came in loudly.

Urle had seen glances between the two that showed both rivalry for influence and also attraction.  Neither, he thought, were selfish or greedy, but they had slightly differing thoughts on their people.

It made Urle’s position difficult.  If he won over one, it might make the other oppose him.  He had to make himself a trusted friend to both.

“Outlander,” Hornblower said to him with a nod.

“Hornblower,” Urle said, politely.

The !Xomyi man looked to Ukn!aa.  “What do the spirits say?” he demanded.

Ukn!aa said nothing, continuing her trance-like dance.  Her eldest daughter approached Hornblower.

“My mother is still speaking to the spirits,” she said.  “They are disquiet.”

“Why?”

The daughter’s eyes flickered, briefly, to Urle.  “She is still trying to learn.  The Sky is angry.  The Moon looks down on us and is not pleased with what it sees.”

Hornblower’s gaze also flickered towards Urle.

There had yet to be an outward hostility to him.  But he was a change, to a people who had a predictable way of life.  That was enough to put some concern in their minds.

“How do we please the moon?” Hornblower asked.

“She will learn,” the eldest daughter insisted.

Urle felt eyes on him again from the two younger daughters of Ukn!aa.  They were not staring, but simply glancing at him, nervously.

He had been hoping to speak to the shaman woman, and then start helping with the threshing and grinding.

But perhaps it would be better for him to step out.  For now.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 24

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The next dawn, the !A!amo camp was gone.

Before light had even come, they had broken down their camp, taking just an hour, and set out through the jungle.

Brooks was with them.

He joined their group just before they left.  All of their rope dwellings had been brought down, wrapped around limbs or bodies.  Even the children, save for the very young Picky Little One, were carrying packs or skeins of rope.

They truly did not possess much in the way of goods.  Much of the food they had gathered had seemed to disappear, though Brooks spied several freshly-dug holes in the ground.  Perhaps, he thought, they had cached some of the foods.

They still carried some containers; they had a handful of clay pots, and also a few plastic containers that they had apparently scrounged from Brooks’s own camp.

Their value hadn’t occurred to him, but they clearly appreciated their light weight and great strength, and through their clear sides he could see strips of meat wrapped in leaves and dried berries.

He offered to carry some ropes, and the !A!amo seemed put off by it.

“You are coming?” Tracker asked.

“Yes,” Brooks replied.  “I will travel with you.”

Tracker’s ears had gone back, a sign of confusion.  “Spirits usually dwell in one place.”

“I never said I was a spirit.  Only that I came from the sky.”

Tracker laughed at that.  “Maybe you are not a spirit.  But you are too strange to be !Xomyi, No Wings.”

“I thought you would be very surprised at how I look different when we first met,” Brooks commented.  “I thought you might be afraid.”

Tracker made an approximation of a shrug.  “There are many different things in the world.  You have a face, so you have a soul.  What is there to be afraid of if you have a soul?”

A face equalled a soul, eh?  That was worth remembering.  His system made a note of it.

Many cultures associated the soul with a certain part of the body – the head, the heart, the eyes, the pineal gland.

It likely varied between different !Xomyi cultures as widely as it did on Earth.

Or, a part of him wondered, was their cultural separation still so recent in times that there would be shared ideas?  That concept of ur-culture, a first culture of a people, was a heady idea.  No one could truly say if it was even real – not among humanity, Dessei, Sepht, or even Bicet, who recorded everything.  An ur-culture, if it ever existed, had existed before the written word had even been dreamed of.

The march through the jungle was a difficult affair, the thick growths of mushrooms, some of them with strange, fleshy webs between them, slowed them to a crawl.

Brooks realized he was the loudest of them all, even carrying nothing.

Part of it was because he was so much larger than the !Xomyi, but even more was his own ineptitude at traversing the jungle.  He could not well-judge which was the quietest and surest place to step on the path, he was not used to weaving through the undergrowth.

He set his system to analyzing the environment and the !Xomyi both.  It would not give him that muscle-training on its own, but he could garner tips that way at least.

Tracker seemed amused.

“A sky spirit does not know the jungle,” he said.

“It’s true,” Brooks said.  “The sky is very open.”

“But full of clouds!  I have always wondered; how does a cloud feel?”

“Like nothing at all,” Brooks told him.

He sensed a presence on his other side.  Turning quickly, he saw that Knows the World was there.

“You know the clouds?” the being asked, cryptically.

“He says they feel like nothing!” Tracker ventured.

Knows the World did not reply.  Brooks had thought the wise man might contradict him, tell some fable of the clouds and how they would feel.  But to his credit, Knows the World did not do that.

“How does the sky smell?” the wise man asked.

“It smells of very little,” Brooks said.  “The air moves, and takes with it all scents.”

“Mm,” Knows the World grunted, turning and walking ahead.

Brooks watched him, then scanned over the rest of the group.

They were all nervous, he realized.  Watching outward, not inward, and those who were armed fingered their weapons, keeping them ready for instant action.

“What is it that your people fear?” Brooks asked.  The question was open-ended, but he’d learned that they took as a default that one spoke of the moment, rather than generalities or other times.

“They are nervous because of the Day Stalker,” Tracker told him.

“Day Stalker,” Brooks repeated.  His system picked the word out, and he tried to say it with his true voice.

Keko!un,” he said, trying the actual word.  His mask, catching that the word was in the !A!amo language, let it come out unfiltered.

Tracker tilted his head curiously for a moment, perhaps hearing that something was different in his voice.

“You do not know keko!un?” Tracker asked earnestly.

“They do not live in the sky,” Brooks told him.  “They are new to me.”

“Oh, that sounds like a very nice place!” Tracker said, making a sound Brooks had come to realize was akin to laughter.

“Would you want to see it?” Brooks asked, feeling his heart rate pick up.  Was this an in?  A way to at least start putting the idea in their minds?

“Oh no, today is for walking,” Tracker said.

“Well, perhaps tomorrow.  Or another day?”

“Haha, tomorrow is for hunting hamomo!” Tracker replied, smiling again.

He began to move away, and Brooks followed him.

“Perhaps another day after that?” Brooks suggested.

Tracker seemed to find the question odd.  “Tomorrow I must worry about hunting hamomo,” he insisted.  It was a clear dismissal.

“So these keko!un are dangerous?” Brooks asked, changing the topic.

“Oh yes,” Tracker said.  “You do not know so I must tell you.  But we do not speak of them among ourselves – all know, and to speak of them is bad keotli.”

Brooks noted that word – it did not translate.  Luck, perhaps?

Tracker kept talking.  “When we stay in one place too long, keko!un appear.  Slowly !A!amo disappear.  Sometimes just one, sometimes many of us, leaving only memory.  We are smart, but keko!un are smart as well.  Sometimes they come alone, when the sun is brightest and we see poorly.  No other predator is smart enough to attack us in the day, only sometimes big heavy stompers.”  Tracker emulated a huge creature walking, making thumping noises and deep cries.  “But we hear them and can avoid them.  We are small meals to them, anyway.  Not worth the trouble we give.”  He grinned and held up his spear.

“So they only attack in the day?” Brooks asked.

“They attack when they will.  Sometimes they come at night to take us unexpectedly.  Sometimes they even come in groups.  Groups of Keko!un are much worse, they plan.”

“They plan and hunt in groups?” Brooks asked.  “Are they intelligent?”

Again, Tracker reacted oddly.  “They plan,” he said.  “I must move ahead to keep watch,” he added after a moment.

No Day Stalkers attacked during the trip, Brooks noted.  The group made it to their new spot without much difficulty, though two of the children fell in a stream not long before arrival.  They were pulled out and yelled at by their mothers.

Brooks found it amusing, until he saw how much real fear there was in the parents.

There was no doctor to summon if they had been hurt.  There was no help, no resources beyond the group and what they carried.

Sobered, he stayed at the edge of the camp, trying to be out of their way as the !A!amo set up their small tents and dug a fire pit.

“Kai,” he radioed.  “Do you have a fix on my location?”

“Yes,” she called.  “Bringing our new camp, found another location a few hundred meters away.  Will be set up within the hour.”

“I’ll be staying with the !A!amo in their camp if I can,” he said.

She sounded a little annoyed.  “I wish you’d let me walk with you.”

“Someone needed to set up the camp.  But we can ingratiate you with them if you really want.”

“Not really,” she replied.  “I’m not a people person anymore.  I don’t think I’d be a help in making them like us.”

Brooks wondered what Kai’s real reason was; she was just as personable as him if she tried.  But she had kept up walls, and that did make her a liability in this endeavor, even though it would be better for them to become comfortable with multiple humans.

After the new camp took shape, Brooks watched in fascination as the !A!amo got to work.

No one need give an order, other than some of the parents to their children.

The men started chipping pieces of rock – flint, he realized.  They did not produce a whole head, but instead just flakes which they fitted laboriously into a stick shaft along the side.

The women took these tools and fanned out, cutting down tall bladed grass that grew in the gaps among the trees.

Which were themselves surprising.  The jungle in most other places he’d seen had been so dense that there were few gaps for such grass to grow.

The climate was changing, he realized.  Just how, or what the cause might be, he did not know.  The processes involved would be complex.

But where the trees thinned and grass grew, this made a good spot for the !Xomyi.

That their sickles were still straight sticks, not even the half-circle curves that were more efficient, Brooks surmised that this gathering of grass must be a relatively new innovation.

After they had made their grass cutters, the men began to spread out into the jungle.  Off to hunt, perhaps?

As the women brought back the grass, the children quickly began to take it up and weave it into ropes.

“Will you help?” Sweet Child asked him.

“I’ve never done that before,” he said.

“Really?  I will show you.”

The child’s fingers were tiny compared to his, far more deft.  He watched her work, weaving the blades together quickly.

He tried to do the same, and she laughed without cruelty.  “You really haven’t done this before!”

He just smiled.  “My skills lay elsewhere.”

Sweet Child looked slightly puzzled, but then went back to focusing on her rope.

Brooks left the children working, observing some of the women in the camp.

They were digging in the ground, and he wasn’t sure why until one pulled something large from the ground.

At first he thought it was some sort of tuber, almost perfectly round, but then he realized that it was a clay pot, sticky with soil.

How had it gotten buried?  He came closer, watching.

There was a flat lid, that had been sealed with something that looked like wax mixed with tar.  They peeled it open, and a strong smell hit him, even from here.

It was tantalizingly familiar to something he’d smelled before, and despite it being nearly unbearably strong he wasn’t put off by it.

Fermentation, he realized.

It smelled stronger than anything fermented he’d ever had, and in this climate he’d never thought it could be safely done.

But this wasn’t Earth, it was Ko.  With its own slightly different organic chemistry set and an entirely different set of microbes.

The women each took some of whatever was in the jar – it reminded him of kimchi – and tasted it, seeming satisfied.

They noticed him watching.

“Taste?” one asked, offering a handful of the food.

He politely declined and they just shrugged.

Walking out of the camp, he looked around for the men, but could not see them.

Squatting in place, he checked the drones.  The whole spy group had travelled along with them, and through their eyes he could see the entire area from any angle, choosing to look down from above.

The !Xomyi appeared as red dots superimposed over the map, and his system sorted out the men.

They had spread out in all directions in small groups.  Foraging?

One set of two suddenly moved quickly, in a short burst.  He switched to a drone view of them on the ground.

It was Brave Hunter and Diver.  The latter of them had some small creature, like a lizard but with six limbs, impaled on his spear.

So they were just taking small, easy game to fill their bellies for the night, he realized.

A group of females moved past him.  He watched them for a time, but they did not travel far, only digging into the ground.  They weren’t digging up any more jars, but sometimes he saw them come up with tubers.

“May I see that?” he asked one.  His system identified her as Soon Mother . . . and living up to her name, he realized that she was pregnant.  Her stomach was larger than most !Xomyi, though it was subtler than on a human woman.

Soon Mother offered him the tuber.

He took from his pocket a small device.  It was just a small control board with a sensor and screen – a chemosensor.  He scanned the tuber.  After a moment the device beeped.

“Thanks,” he said.  Feeding its data into his headset, he looked out.

“There’s three buried together here,” he said, walking over and pointing.

Soon Mother came over, frowning at him, but then digging at the spot.  She came up a moment later with a tuber.  Two more were visible in the ground.

She raised her head, large eyes going even wider, filled with awe.

Keotli,” she breathed.  “You are a spirit!  How did you know?”

That word again, he noticed.  But it was a mystery he’d have to solve later.

“It is a tool,” he said, kneeling next to her.  He showed her the chemosensor.  “It can smell the tubers.  Just point and look through the screen.  They will appear as a glow.”

Soon Mother seemed shocked, looking from him to the chemosensor.  With unsure hands she took the device.  “It is keotli,” she said.  She held it up, looking around, then let out a yelp as she saw something.  Hurrying over, she dug and pulled up a tuber.

“Come!” she cried to the other women.  “Come and see No Wings’s keotli!”

The others came, marveling at the device.

Brooks smiled.  He had not intended it as a gift, but he was reminded of the old wisdom about teaching a man to fish.

They could keep the chemosensor.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 23

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The path to the camp of the !A!amo was a familiar one to Brooks now.

A few days after he had first visited them in their home, they had crossed the bridge and set up a new camp not far from his.

At first, their acceptance of him had been simply something of convenience; he had food to give them, and they were happy to take it.

Once he made clear that it was freely given, they accepted it as easily as they accepted any food from nature.  He saw them collect and eat berries with the same attitude as they came into his camp and took the rations he offered.

Kai looked upon their casual attitude with a little more concern.

“Things are going missing,” she said.  “Nothing important yet, but I’m concerned that one day we’ll wake up and they’ll have figured out how to take down the tents.”

“We’ll be vigilant.  Make sure you never set your rifle out of your sight,” he told her.

“I never do!” she said, nearly defensive.

Kai had yet to have to fire her rifle, but the !A!amo seemed to have figured out that it was a weapon.  Hard Biter had offered her a very nice spear for it, which she had spent some time declining.

“A gift of weapons,” he said with some confusion, something that had ritual significance to them.

“Mine is very special to me,” she had told him.

It had puzzled him to a degree, but after a time he had accepted it.

As their gift food ran low, Brooks began to offer them tools; they were simple things, axes and knives.  They took an interest in other tools – mostly the children.

“They’re playing with wrenches,” he noted to Kai, watching some of the younger !Xomyi flit about.

Grown !Xomyi could not fly or even glide, but the young could, and a common form of play involved climbing and leaping off to glide towards the ground.  There seemed some sort of rule set, and the young ones on the ground had taken to clinking metal tools together in time as another glided.

“We’re not running out, I guess they can keep them,” Kai said.  “I don’t think it’s a good idea to take things away from kids, anyway.”

Each day, he spent as much time as he could with and among them.

The children had accepted him as No Wings to a greater degree than the adults.  There were times they climbed up him like a tree trunk, standing once they were on his shoulders and then they would jump off.

He found he could only share their joy, laughing as they used him as a springboard.

The trust of the children did seem to help; while some of the women would at first keep watch around him very cautiously, within a few days they had accepted him as a caretaker.  They would frequently leave to go gather food and materials in the jungle while he stayed in camp.

It was not a lack of care, he could tell, but simply another way they took advantage of a valuable, limited resource: time.  The !Xomyi had a higher metabolism than a human, and ate a lot for their size.  Finding enough was difficult, and even as he gave them enough for days, they continued to collect food, drying meats and berries, and other things.

“Oh, this is very slow,” Tracker told him when Brooks asked about their busy work.  Among the adults, he was the most friendly, and seemed to find enjoyment in talking.  He would often come over to Brooks and they’d share some of the smoking sticks, which the !Xomyi called tsetet.  Y had declared them mostly harmless.  Mostly it was hard for Brooks to smoke them because of his mask, but it did have a small openable intake port.

“We are relaxing most of the time because you give much,” Tracker explained.  “It confused us very much that you would just give.  But there are stories of spirits like you.  We accept, and gladly, for we do not want to offend you and have you leave.”

There was no guile in his words that Brooks could find.

“I am happy to give all I have,” he told Tracker.  “But I soon I will be out.”

“Will you go hungry?” Tracker asked him.  “I have not seen you hunt.”

“No, I will not,” Brooks replied.

“What do you eat?” Tracker asked.

“My food is different,” he told Tracker, vaguely.  “You would not like it.”  He did not want to get too specific if he could help it; human food would be dangerous for !Xomyi.

“Ah,” Tracker replied.  “Spirit food.  Yes, we know of it.”

“And what is it that spirits eat?” Brooks asked with a smile.  They had quickly figured out the expression as showing amusement.

“Air and earth,” Tracker said.  “Blech!  Not fit for me.  Only spirits can live on it.”

They both laughed in their own ways, and Brooks wondered how much of what Tracker had said was just joking.

He – and most of the other !Xomyi – seemed to have a very positive outlook towards the world around them.

“No Wings, after you are out of food to give,” Tracker continued after a time, “We will be moving.  This is not a good place.”

He heard them call him No Wings from time to time, among many other epithets.  This one seemed to stick the most, and he was all right with it.  It seemed a jest at his expense, but a good-natured one.

Picky Little One, Tracker’s young daughter, came flitting over.  Brooks had spotted her up in the tree listening, and now she came gliding down, onto Brooks’s head.

“Oof, you’re a little heavy for using my head like that,” he said, not harshly.

“What?” the little one asked.  It was her favorite word.

“It’s fine,” Brooks said, helping her down onto his shoulder.  She weighed still about three kilograms, which seemed small to him, compared to the other children.

Tracker made a cooing sound to his daughter, reaching up to take her hand.

She made the same sing-song back to him, and Brooks felt privileged to see this moment.  There was no translation for their sounds, nor was it needed.

“Hakki!” the girl-child said, holding out empty hands.

Tracker reached into a leather pouch that hung from around his neck.  Rolled up in a leaf was some morsel that he gave to his daughter.  She eagerly took it, examined it.

That word again; he heard it frequently, always in the context of asking for something that was expected to be given.  So far they had not used it to him, which he took as a sign that he was not accepted as one of them, only a visitor they liked.

A distant cry caught Tracker’s attention.  “I will see you before the sun sleeps, No Wings,” he said, heading away.  “Goodbye.  I see you still live up to your name!” he added to his daughter, who was still examining the food carefully.

Brooks had wanted to learn more about their planned leaving, but there was time yet.  They were nomadic, and this was not unexpected.

“I’m going to write now,” he told Picky Little One.

She was finally nibbling the morsel of food, though with an expression he took to be skepticism.

She seemed to decide she did not like it, and simply held it.  “What’s writing?”

Brooks took out his tablet and a stylus.  He opened up his mission journal, and wrote a large version of his name.  “I use this stick to draw symbols.  They mean things, so that if I need to remember them later I can look back and see them.”

She seemed more interested in the food again, but cast a skeptical eye to the tablet.  “Why not just remember?” she asked.

“Sometimes there’s a lot to remember,” he said.

She looked a little skeptical again, watching him curiously, but then moved to look at the screen more.  “It looks pretty,” she said.

He made broad, sweeping strokes.  “This is my name,” he said.

“That’s not your name!  Your name is No Wings!”

He smiled and wrote that out.  “This means No Wings.”

There was further fluttering around them as a number of older !Xomyi children came in.

“What is that?” one asked.  He was an older boy, Brooks’s system identified him as Bold Child.

He came up and took the stylus from Brooks’s hand, studying it.

It was made of a white plastic.  He tried to flex it, found it would not bend, and then bit it.

“It’s not food,” Brooks said sternly.  “And it is mine.”  He knew he had to make a boundary or it would disappear.

He held out his hand, and Bold Child gave it back.  “I was only curious,” he said.

“That’s fine.  Now, this is a stylus, and I was writing . . .”

He explained it all again, writing his name, and then their names.

“May I try?” an older girl, who was known as Sweet Child, asked.

Brooks gave her the stylus.  She held it clumsily, but made a mark on the screen, pressing hard like it was a literal stick in mud.

“I did it!” she said excitedly.  She made another mark, next to it.

“Let me try!” Bold Child said, pushing in.

“One at a time,” Brooks said.  “Take turns.”

That idea was somewhat odd to them, but with a few commands he managed to set up some boundaries.  Each child took a turn.

“How many hamomo I will hunt soon!” Bold Child proclaimed as he made many marks.

Another child smiled slyly.  He was known as Causes Trouble.  “Very small hamomo.”

“Those don’t look like hamomo,” Wants to Hunt, another boy, said.  “They are just sticks.”  He took the stylus and made a shape.  It was somewhat like a potato.  He drew lines coming from it.  “That is a hamomo, a great one, that I will hunt very soon!”

“You two are not humble,” another said.  He was known as Slow Child, and Brooks was still trying to figure out if he was thought to be slow of mind or body, as he did not seem to display either trait.  If anything, he seemed rather clever.  “You bring bad luck to yourselves.”

The other two boys seemed immediately shamed.

“I want to have a jumping game,” Bold Child proclaimed.

He was very good at it, Brooks knew.  But as he and the other boys climbed a tree, Bold Child seemed to hold back, letting the others do better than him.

The other children all followed, either playing or watching and beating their stolen metal tools together.

Only Picky Little One stayed.

“Not a hamomo,” she said at the drawing Wants to Hunt had made.

Brooks did not actually know what a hamomo looked like, so he could not say.

He blanked the page, and the little girl gasped, reaching up to touch the screen.  “Hamomo gone,” she said.

“I can draw other things,” Brooks told her.  “Here’s a tree.”

He had practiced and studied line drawing in the past, but he was no artist; his talent was simple, and his sketch was basic.  But it was, he thought unmistakably, a tree.

“Not a tree,” Picky Little Child said.

“It’s just a drawing of one,” Brooks said.  “Do you ever draw with a stick in the mud?”

“I don’t know,” she muttered, looking at the food her father had given her again.

He looked back at it.  “These are the leaves.”  He pointed from the drawing to real leaves hanging from a tree branch nearby.

She looked.  Studied the image, then looked at the tree carefully.

“No,” she said.  Then, leaping from his shoulder, she floated away.

Brooks smiled and leaned back.  Soon, he would go to speak to another adult, but he did have a report to make.

And among the !Xomyi, he knew it would help to adjust to their timings and schedules.  He could not spend all his time seeking them out.  Giving them time might even help them to find they wanted to seek him.

He looked at the tree sketch again.  It was a decent enough sketch, he thought, and on a whim he saved it – along with the sketches the children had made.

Perhaps, he thought, the world looked different through their eyes.


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