Episode 12 nearing completion

I know people must be wondering about the latest story. I am still working every day! At this point I am nearing the finale; only a few more scenes left to write. Editing will have to begin then, but I do not think it will be very long.

This is now the longest Other-Terrestrial story I have written, currently sitting near 90,000 words (I estimate only because the official count includes some notes and such that will be taken out + there’s always editing). I expect it may surpass 100k by the time I’m done. I started the file for this episode on April 23rd, so about 100 days so for a novel-length work – pretty good, I think.

It is the most ambitious story to date, not only incorporating the setting and its myriad complex characters and advanced but grounded* technologies, but also extensive study (albeit amateur) of anthropology, geology, physics, and biology to create a vibrant, living world with an intelligent species with plausible society and culture, as well as a realistic world and biosphere being impacted by stellar-scale threats. It’s been a lot of effort, but including ideas that I’ve wanted to explore for many years, long before I even started Other-Terrestrial.

Well, I have little else to say. I have some other stuff coming on here, supplementary materials, that I hope to put soon.

Planet Ko

I’ve been very busy (still writing every chance I get), but I thought I might share some background information on the world I have created for the new story!

Here is my (admittedly simple) art of the world, Ko.

Ko is a very warm planet, slightly larger than Earth, with a mass 1.34x Earth’s, and a radius of 1.17 earth radii (or 7,454.07 km). This makes it slightly less dense than earth at 4.59 grams per cubic centimeter, and with a surface gravity of 0.97 that of Earth. Its atmosphere is 1.6x as dense as Earth, which is heavy, but still breathable for humans. It has a rotational period of about 27 hours, so it has longer days.

Due to its atmospheric makeup containing more water vapor, Ko has an average temperature of 22 C / 71.6 F, which is much warmer than Earth (which averages 15 C / 59 F). This is why the majority of its land mass are very warm climates (aside from those smaller islands far to the North).

I only show this hemisphere because the other one has only one small landmass, near the equator, which is devoid of intelligent life. The fact that all the continents are collected like this has several big implications.

Firstly, the free-flow of water north and south helps keep the planet warm – Ko has no glaciation. It also means that the winds that whip over those oceans have nothing to slow them down, causing the winds and waves to get very, very strong!

Ko orbits its host star, Bror, at 1.14 astronomical units (one AU is the average distance from the Earth to the Sun), and there are seven other planets in the system, which would mostly be familiar to us, except for the frozen water world that orbits outside the hospitable zone at 3.2 AU. This similarity to our system is coincidental, btw, I rolled a D10 for how many planets the system would have!

I could go on all day with other details about its neighboring planets, the star Bror, and things like Ko’s axial tilt (it’s not as tilted as Earth) . . . but I imagine you get the picture!

Figuring out all of these details of Ko (and there are plenty more; I even figured out the makeup of its atmosphere to help with elements of the story) was a fun and challenging process. I used a variety of books (such as World-Building by Stephen Gillett), scientific papers (such as the incredible Habitable Planets for Man by Stephen H. Dole), and youtube channels (like the excellent Artifexian) to help me in this process.

I put a lot of work into the background of each story, to make sure that the science is as good as I can make it. I have a number of friends who are mathematicians or engineers who kindly help me with this process (and who frequently check my math). If you’d like to know more background stuff like this, want to know more specifically about Ko, or just want to know more about how I do these things, please let me know!

As for Episode 12, it is coming soon, I promise. 🙂 I am writing thousands of words a day.

Episode 12 Update and Cover

Just a brief update – Episode 12 is about 2/3 finished at this point, and over 59,000 words. I am writing thousands of words each day, multiple scenes. This is not to say I am rushing, but this story is already written in my mind, and so I must just put it on my screen!

Soon I’ll share more about Ko, but I’ve been exhausted since my crazy work week last week, followed up with a lot of housework. Anyone who has a family knows how it can be!

Here is the cover for Episode 12 – Exodus!

A First Look at Episode 12

Today, we’ll take our first look at the upcoming Episode 12 of Other-Terrestrial.

Titled “Exodus”, the episode will involve a new species of aliens, who come to be called the !Xomyi. The ! at the start of the name represents an postalveolar click sound, which is a type of click that appears in only a handful of human languages in Africa, and in one ritual language in Australia. It is created with a downward motion of a concave tongue.

The ! sound exists in the word because the !Xomyi are a species descended from nocturnal ancestors who were able to use a form of echolocation. Clicks and other sounds are common in their languages – of which there are many! It exists in the names of specific groups, such as the !A!amo, in animals such as keko!un (a type of predator), he!pa (a type of animal the !Xomyi hunt), and the ko!go (a bird-like animal).

The !Xomyi are not a united people, but exist still as hunter-gatherers. There are many scattered groups of !Xomyi across their homeworld of Ko.

While normally the Sapient Union would be quite happy to leave such a people to their own devices, to allow them to develop in their own way, there are still events that may force contact . . .

I’ve done a lot of work on this, and soon I’ll share some other background material, like my map of Ko and the cover art for the episode!

Episode 12 is in progress

Now that episode 11 is finished, I can give you some updates on the next episode!

Episode 12 is currently in-progress – it is approximately half written at this time. As you may guess, then, it’s not going to be getting posted very soon.

There are several factors at play here. I have two other jobs, and when combined my weeks sometimes go quite long. Occasionally, I’m fortunate enough to be able to write on my break at work, but that’s not all the time.

Another factor is the length; this coming episode will be, I predict, the longest I have written, into full-length novel territory. Currently, it is 35,000 words, and as I said – I am only half done. The longest episode prior to this, Episode 6 – Diplomatic Maneuvers (where they had the battle with the Hev) was 66,571 words in total.

The final reason this is taking so long is how much effort I am putting into this episode. It was one of the earliest concepts for a story I had, but I always knew it needed to wait until a certain time for it to have the proper impact.

I will be elaborating more on the episode soon, and keeping my readers updated on its progress, so please stay tuned!

Oh, one final thing – I will reveal the name of the upcoming episode; Exodus. And though the word is biblical, the story itself is not religious in nature.

I have really done my homework for this one to create as good a story as I can. I can’t wait to elaborate further.

Episode 11 – “Masquerade”, Epilogue

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The watch after Darkeve was, in Urle’s opinion, the most boring.

The partying lasted a good twenty-four to thirty hours, but even the most energetic of the revellers began to grow weary after that.

Then was the time of thousands of drones cleaning up and lonely watches.

And nine months after that, he thought in slight amusement, a baby boom.  Happened every year.

They had only twelve on the command deck right now, the bare minimum.

The ship was as safe as could be; they were alone, deep in space well within Union territory.  There were no known objects flying through this sector.  Even the light of their presence was years away from any outposts or ships.

So it was almost just a formality to have anyone on duty, he thought.  The ship’s AIs were more than capable of running unsupervised for a time.

Not that he was complaining.  This was his chosen path, and people were out here because they wanted to be.  It would be easy to send out probes, to sit back in one’s home system, and never see things with your own eyes or experience them.

But the same could be said of almost everything.  You could let all your art and stories be written by AI, let them make your food, let them control everything.

But what would be the point of living, then?

People would just let themselves be fully replaced.

He sighed, shifting in his seat.  The quiet hours left a lot of time for contemplation.

The command center doors opened, startling him.  His system normally informed him of anyone who was approaching this area.

Kell came in, and he relaxed somewhat.  His diplomatic credentials were one possible reason for the lack of warning.

But Urle found that he could not relax as much as he’d like; Kell’s presence seemed more over-bearing than usual, and his real skin crawled as the being approached, as if a sphere of his disturbing presence was washing over him.

Maybe that was how it worked, he thought.  Aside from the purely-subjective feel of it, it didn’t show up on scanners, not even their most sensitive krahteon arrays.

“Good evening, Ambassador,” he said.  “What has you up at this hour?”

“The ship is quieter,” Kell replied.  He did not look at Urle, but stepped up next to the command chair, looking out at the screens that showed blank space around them.

“Yeah, the party has finally died down.  Now it’s peaceful.”

Urle followed Kell’s gaze, looking out at space.  “Not much around us to see right now.”

“I do like seeing the stars in novel arrangements,” Kell said.

“I guess you must be pretty used to Earth’s skies,” Urle noted.  “You know there’s not as much variation in color as you might expect in the skies of Earth-like worlds.  Most of the times the sky is still just blue.  It can be other colors with a lot of dust or a less Earth-like atmosphere, but that’s not as common as you might think . . .”

“Mm,” Kell replied.

Urle let the topic drop.

“Did you read the information packet we sent you about the holiday?” he asked.

“Yes,” Kell said.

“What do you make of it?”

“The idea of warding off evil spirits is not a new concept for your kind,” Kell replied.  “But at best it is merely an attempt to bring order and some measure of control to a universe you have no sway over.”

Urle could see the truth in that.  “It’s more just a cultural tradition at this point.  We do enjoy a reason to celebrate.”

“Perhaps the wrong way to go,” Kell said.  “You are not wrong to fear the dark.”

Urle was finding that he really resented Kell’s attitude sometimes.  He took a moment to let the annoyance fade before he spoke again.

“Do your people have any holidays?  Special times?  Shoggoths, that is.”  Not . . . whatever this sort of meat puppet was.  He could still recall, with some horror, how Kell had told him that this body was merely a marionette, controlled by the true being that he had never actually met.  That was, Kell had said, something beyond them.

“No,” Kell replied, taking a long time in answering.

Of course not, Urle thought.

“I’m surprised I didn’t see you out there today,” he said.

Kell looked down at him.  “You did.”

Urle paused.  Kell could look different at will; it was something he’d seen with his own eyes, even if he could not really explain it.  The sheer amount of energy needed to rearrange the cells in a body alone would be huge.

Yet Kell’s body always looked, if anything, cold in infrared.

“Did you wear a costume?”

Kell’s look turned to that look he so often wore; a sort of steady disappointment mixed with superiority.

“This is my costume,” Kell replied.

Urle felt himself shudder slightly, and he looked away.

Kell kept standing there for a long time, merely staring out into the darkness.

Urle felt like he, personally, did not have to look far to find it.


FINIS


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Episode 11 – “Masquerade”, part 32

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“That was the strangest movie I have ever seen,” Jaya declared.

She turned to Apollonia, who was grinning like a madwoman – though with a hint of nervousness.  “I had a marvelous time,” Jaya added honestly.

“It was quite silly,” Y said.  “Despite the abysmal acting, however, I did find the special effects of the space sharks consuming people to be quite effective.  I can imagine to many they were traumatizing!”

“Oh, yeah, I heard that when Shark Hole 2 came out, people vomited in the theater!” Apollonia said.

“I heard that, too!” Ann replied.  She suddenly looked sheepish.  “Two of my friends left the theater when the baby sharks ate that one man from the inside out.”

“It was kinda long, like ten full minutes of munching,” Apollonia agreed.  “But I guess they had to really get his death throes in there.”

Y seemed fascinated.  “I may have to look up this movie.”

“I think I’ll pass on that one,” Jaya said.

Brooks seemed more thoughtful.  “I was surprised by the amount of sex.  After the third time a couple was eaten during the throes of passion you would think they’d realize it was attracting the space sharks.”

“It’s a horror movie, people always have to be banging,” Apollonia said.

“Ah, yes,” Brooks said.  “Of course.  But I’m glad Urle wasn’t here with his kids . . .”

“I was going to have it skip those parts if they were!” Apollonia said quickly.

Jaya laughed, then yawned.  “I am quite tired – and I imagine you are exhausted, Apollonia.”

The yawn proved contagious, and Apollonia followed suit.  “Well now that you remind me . . . yeah.”

Y studied her.  “You are quite past your bed time,” he said.  “Ah, how unfortunate you did not get to see all twenty of my costumes.  I had many interesting examples.”

“Show me tomorrow?” Apollonia asked.

“You will have to possess yourself with patience and see the ones you missed next year,” Y said with mock-gravity.

Ann waved.  “I’m heading out, thank you for the movie!”

“You’re welcome!” Apollonia called back.

Jaya moved to follow her.  “We’ll run later than normal tomorrow,” she said to Apollonia.  “Because otherwise we’d have to be up in . . . Dark, just three hours.”

“Oh thank the stars,” Apollonia muttered.

Brooks smiled.  “You can have the day off tomorrow, Apple.  And thanks for the film, I enjoyed it.”

As they left, Y turned to follow, but Apollonia caught his arm.

“One last thing,” she said to him.  “I had a thought.  Or, well, Kiseleva said something to me that gave me a thought.”

“Yes?” Y prompted patiently.

“She was telling me that I should try to figure out what I want to do, you know?  Not just what I think I should do.  And I was thinking . . . I want to help people.  So what if I went into medical?  I mean, I’m not doctor material or anything, of course, but surely there’s something I could do!”

She bit her lip.  “Right?”

Y paused, seeming surprised by her suggestion.  “I believe that this is a very interesting idea, Nor.  There is much merit in it – and let us speak on it again tomorrow.”

Apollonia smiled.  “So . . . you’re okay with the idea?”

“Of course I am,” Y said.  “Now, good night – and happy Darkeve, my friend.”

Y patted her shoulder, giving it a squeeze, then stepped out of the door, leaving Apollonia alone.

But, despite the exhaustion and the emotional rollercoaster of the day, she felt better than she had in a long time.


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