Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 37

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RP-1, also known as the “responsemobile” by some members of the team, was ready for orbital insertion.

“All team members secure, Commander,” Kiseleva called. “Now pack us up-“

“And ship us off to hell!” the rest of the team cheered.

The mood was light, positive, Pirra thought.  Like this was a weekend trip.

She didn’t like it.

Orbital drops were a very real scenario that they trained for and practiced often.

But it was always risky.  The spaceplane would get hit with temperatures of nearly 2000 С, and if anything went wrong, that would ruin anyone’s day.

The main hangar had been emptied of other personnel and the air removed.  The main doors opened, and the automated systems lifted them up and out.

Once they were free, the system plotted their course and they began moving.

Pirra went onto a private channel to Craton command.

“Captain, requesting permission to perform a Hazardous Drop drill.  We rarely get to practice under real drop conditions,” she called.

In the background, Jack Lal was leading the rest of the unit in a spirited, and highly inappropriate espatier song that involved a lost lover, a dead ship, and some kind of alien blob.

“This is Captain Jaya,” the response to Pirra came.  “Permission granted, Commander.  I expect your team to perform admirably.”

Pirra felt a thrill of amusement go through her.

They were just about to hit atmosphere when she turned on the all-unit channel.

“Team, we’re going to be running a Hazardous Drop simulation on our way down.  As of this moment, we are under fire.”

The singing stopped, and the simulation began.  Warnings popped up in their HUDs of missile locks, of incoming hostile drones, and of enemy forces on the surface prepared to do anything to make sure they did not land alive.

“Countermeasures activated!” Kiseleva called.  “Registering equivalent-level weapons technology.”

“We’re boned,” she heard Guoming mutter.

“Do not begin defeatist talk,” Kessissiin said sharply.

“Quiet,” Pirra said.  “Work the problem.  Are countermeasures working?”

“We have become effectively invisible to the missiles,” Kiseleva said.  “Until they launch the next batch.”

“Starting remote hack attempt,” Jack Lal called.  “Attempt one failed.  They have a good firewall, we’re not going to get in it in time.”

“We have dumb-fired weaponry coming up from the ground!”

“Begin evasive maneuvers, they have a good idea of our way down, I want to make it as unpredictable as possible.”

It was a risky move; the ship had high tolerances that could handle these maneuvers, but there were still great forces on a ship that was going through an atmosphere, and this was a denser-than-Earth atmo.  Going too strong on a maneuver could cause the ship to tumble like a leaf in the breeze.  They could get out of such a tumble, but they were not going to take a risky path just for this fictional scenario.  While it did move somewhat to give them the sensation of altering course, it kept it within tolerances.

“Plasma shell forming,” she heard called.  “We’ll be losing sensors soon.”

This was the most dangerous part of a combat drop.  Such a thing was, in reality, near suicide.  An enemy below would just be able to bring too many weapons to bear, they’d have too little ability to maneuver, and even if they did one could not realistically dodge a smart missile.

“Dropping a spare fuel pod,” Kiseleva said.  “We won’t be able to lift off, but it’ll provide some protection.”

All simulated, Pirra knew.  But the feed of the pod dropping, just before the plasma shell around them got too intense to make such a move safe, came up in her visor.  For the sake of seeing how it was projected to perform, she kept the simulation going.

The fuel pod had chambers, which it would dump at intervals.  The fuel ignited instantly as it hit the pod’s own plasma wake from the drop friction, and created a literal wall of fire.

An enemy on the ground would have a hard time seeing through it.  They wouldn’t be able to get a precise lock, and anything else they sent up would be just a shot over a large area.

It was not a bad plan, she thought.  The computer gave it a 42.8% chance of getting them down in one piece.

“Coming out of silence . . . now!” Jack Lal called.  The feeds cleared up, and they saw the ground.  Fire was coming in wildly, but quickly began to home in on them.

“Point-defense cannons firing!” Kiseleva called.  “We’ve got friendlies above us in upper atmo, they’re dropping fire-“

Suddenly everything went red.

“We’re hit,” Pirra said.

“Breaking up,” Kiseleva said with a sigh.

“We’re all dead,” Jack Lal added.  “What was it?”

Pirra checked.  “Lucky shot, actually.  Ah, well, that’s how it goes sometimes.”

Their actual flight was going quite smoothly.  The shaking had mostly stopped, and Pirra twisted in her seat.  “Good job, everyone, that was as good an attempt as I’ve seen.”

“Someday,” Kessissiin said.  “Someone will come up with a good way to land troops under hostile fire.”

“Unlikely, I think,” Kiseleva said.  “The odds are just too stacked.  You can only overwhelm such defenses, try to give too many targets.  The question then is how many you are willing to sacrifice?”

“Look, guys,” Lal said, raising his hands for silence.  “The answer is obvious.  If we just paint big smiley faces on the bottom of the ships-“

The ship lurched, hitting a pocket of turbulence.  Lal drew in his arms, too fast.  He yelled out, as everyone was thrown hard in their seats.

“Jack!” Pirra called.  “Are you okay?”

“I’m fine, I’m fine,” he mumbled.  “I just elbowed myself in the head . . .”

Pirra whistled out a Dessei curse that she knew would not be translated for the others.  “I really shouldn’t have to say this, but everyone keep your limbs down until the ride has come to a complete stop.  Now, don’t guess, anyone – is he okay?”

Kiseleva was studying a readout.  “Med scans suggest a mild concussion.  We can deal with it on the ground.”

Jack made another joke at his expense, and Pirra sighed.  Hopefully, this had been the extent of drama for this mission.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 36

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Two hours later, Apollonia sat in the waiting room outside of Cenz’s office.

She’d come from the medical suite, where Zey had treated her ankle.  She’d sprained it, and on top of that she’d gotten a long cut, something poking into the suit so hard as she’d fallen that it had cut her skin without even penetrating the cloth.  Other than that she only had small cuts and bruises.

Zey had not chewed her out.  But the woman’s silence had been almost as bad.

She could hear stern voices from the office.  The walls were normally soundproof, so part of her imagined that they were letting some of it through intentionally, to help her get the feeling that she was about to be reprimanded.

Cenz always sounded pleasant.  But as he talked to Alisher, tearing him down, it was not pleasant.  Calm, as always, but there was a hard edge she had never heard before.

It was not fair.  Alisher had not done anything wrong.

The thought of being punished, their disappointment, was bad enough.

But in the face of what had almost happened, it felt like nothing.

She’d stared death in the face.  The smell of it, the disgusting, wrinkled skin, was stuck in her memory.  From a distance, she realized it would have been every bit the magnificent creature she imagined.  But up close she’d seen the parasites, the flies, the filth, the stained teeth and the imperfections of a living thing that fitted not at all the magical ideal in her mind.

Hadn’t it been not long ago, on Hell Rock, that she’d wanted to die?  That when faced with the possibility of being spaced, she’d almost gone for it.

Since then, she realized, she’d actually learned that life didn’t always suck.  That it could be good, and that she liked it.  And then she’d almost thrown it away anyway, just out of a stupid childhood obsession.

The door to the office opened, and Alisher stepped out.  He glanced to her, not seeming angry, though still very serious.  He left, then, and she knew she was up.

Going to the office door, Cenz was watching, his face screen off for once.  The lack of the slightly-goofy changing electronic face made him seem more alien and imposing, as the only true bit of “him” she could see was a glimpse of the polyps in their rocky body in the neck of his water suit, which was transparent.

“Apollonia Nor, please sit.”

She stepped up next to the chair.

She felt afraid again, but then thinking of the creature, mere meters away, that could have ended her in a heartbeat, she felt less afraid.

But she didn’t feel less guilty.

“With your permission sir,” she said.  “I’d like to stand.”  She did her best job coming to attention and saluting.

Cenz paused to consider this.  “Very well, Specialist Nor,” he said, using her title.  “I would like to know what went through your head to cause you to make such a decision.”

She considered.  “I have no excuse, sir.  May I . . .” she trailed off, swallowing.  “. . . speak freely?”

Cenz considered, leaning back.  His voice was a warning as he spoke.  “Very well.  I hope you have considered your words carefully.”

“Sir,” she said, “I would like to absolve Lt. Rasulov of any wrongdoing.  I acted entirely on my own, making my own bad decisions, and they should not reflect on him.  I . . . I screwed up.  I just wanted to go look around, and I fell down the hill.  I didn’t mean to put my life or anyone else’s life in danger.  I know pulling the drones to me must have risked the others.”

Cenz moved back slightly, in seeming surprise.

“I take all of the blame, and I hope I can be the only one to receive any punishment.  Whatever you deem appropriate I accept, sir.  Because I fucked up bad.”

She realized her curse, felt a thrill of fear, but then decided; fuck it.

She meant every word.  She felt better for saying them.

But she still didn’t forgive herself.

Cenz spoke.  “You seem to have some understanding of what you did,” he said.  “That it did not simply affect you, but your entire team.  I will be relaying all that has transpired up to Captain Jaya.  She may have more to say to you.  For now, you are confined to base.  Your access to entertainment services is revoked for three days.”

The door opened behind her.  Cenz tilted his head.  “Now go.  I would tell you to reflect on what has happened, but I suspect you will be doing much of that.”


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