Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 57

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“You stand in for Fast of Wing,” Tracker told him.  “His revenge rides on you.”

“I see,” Brooks replied.  “So if I were to somehow fail, Fast of Wing will never be happy.”

“Yes.  What is more, his father’s spirit, full of anger and rage at being killed before his time, will possess you during the hunt.  Should you fail, his spirit will never leave you.”  He shook his head, a way of warding off spirits.  “You do something that is impressive, but foolish.”

Besides hunting a giant, deadly predator, Brooks thought, amused.

“Before his time?” he asked.  The !A!amo had often spoken of everyone having a designated time to die.  It was a coping tool, and to hear something go against it was surprising.  “Isn’t any time we die our time?”

“Not when it is keko!un.  They are bad keotli, given form.  Thus they break the natural cycle.  Bad keotli.”  He shook his head again.

Brooks mulled over that.  Was it just an idea given to a mortal enemy, to make them seem more monstrous and justify horrors against them?  Or perhaps the keko!un were an invasive species, recently come here and upsetting the order that had existed before?  It would explain why the !Xomyi seemed so helpless against them . . .

Tracker waved his hands, a sort of shrug.  “And you have not even blooded a spear.  You do not even have a spear.”

“I might have time to try again to make one.”

“No.  There are other preparations.”  Tracker considered a moment.  Then, he reached into a pouch, and took out a spearhead.

It was large, Brooks noticed immediately.  And it was finely made; one of the best that he had seen.  The shape was perfect, the edges chipped just right to give a serrated cutting edge to all sides.

And rather than flint, it was a dark black glass, whose every surface reflected the light – obsidian.  He’d seen a few such obsidian pieces, but never this nice.

“Take this,” Tracker said.  “It is special to me.  I have never found the time to use it.”

Brooks took the spearhead carefully.  He had never known the !A!amo to value an item, nearly all things seemed to be something they could throw aside and simply find or make anew.  Aside from his scanner, which had quickly become a cherished item among the women, they rarely kept anything for more than a few months.

“This is special.  What is the story behind this?” he asked.

Tracker waved it away.  “A tale for another day.  Take it, my friend.  Strike hard.  Strike true.  The blade will bite deep, if you let it.”


Sitting at the edge of the clearing, Brooks had an excellent view of the sky as Bror set.

It was filled with color – reds, yellows, and oranges that were startlingly beautiful.  Near the lower parts of the horizon, some even skewed green, due to the way their glow traveled through the atmosphere.

Small lines of light streaked across the colors regularly, sometimes swarms of them.

But despite their beauty, both were portents of coming catastrophe.  They both originated from the same source; the moon Omen.

The glows were from dust, floating in space, heating up from the light of Bror.  The streaks were meteors, burning.

Soon, he knew, the meteors would be larger.  Large enough that they would not simply burn up, but would instead hit the land, causing massive craters, seismic activity, and fires.  In Ko’s denser atmosphere, with higher oxygen content, the fires would start even more easily, and would burn hotter and for longer.

By that point, escape would be difficult.  The amount of debris coming down and in orbit would make their planned course incredibly dangerous – and that was if they were lucky and nothing hit near enough that it wrecked their ship.

He knew that their escape shuttle had already been dropped in.  They would not be heading back to Outpost Alexa.  Soon, they’d be evacuating it, too.

He tried to put these thoughts out of his head.

The fire near his feet cracked and popped, protesting against the damp wood he’d used to start it.

Taking up the spear shaft that he’d prepared earlier, he experimentally fitted the obsidian spear head into it.

It was a good fit, more due to how expertly it had been made than his own skill at working the wood.

But it would not be enough to just stick it in.

He looked to the fire, where he had a small shard of a bowl sitting.  He smiled, remembering.  This was a piece of the one they’d given him as a joke, months ago.

He used it now to melt a piece of hardened sap.

Knows the World had shown him one day; which trees could be cut in just the right way to bleed them for their sticky sap.  It dried into hard pieces, but they would melt when heated over a fire.

Mixing in some fibers would give it strength, and then wrapping it with cordage made from the same fibers, woven into a strand, would hold the spear head onto the shaft.

Taking a stick, he smeared the sap onto the end of the obsidian spear head, nestling it into the crook of the shaft.

He smeared more around it, hoping he wasn’t going too heavily on it.

Y had told him a week ago that this sap had very impressive binding qualities, better than similar substances early humans had used.  The doctor had gotten Kai to take scans of it to send up to the Craton, for future materials research studies.

The blade seemed well-set, and he took the cordage that he’d been given by one of the women, and started wrapping it around the base of the blade.  The cords squeezed into the sap, becoming glued in just as much as the blade itself.

So much effort into all of this, he thought, as he finished wrapping the cord and tied it off.

Gathering the stone, gathering the sap, the pole, the grass for cordage.  Even the clay for the potsherd and the wood for his fire.

Then making the blade, a many-hour process, if not days.  Working the pole into a proper spear shaft and notching it.  The hours the women spent turning the fibers into cords.  Now, all of their labor created this weapon.

Just a stone spear, he thought.  It was beautiful in its way, but it reminded him how much effort went into everything he took for granted.  So much was done by machine, so many thousands or millions of hours of labor went into even the simplest device or tool he used . . .

A hint of movement caught his attention, and he looked over, seeing that Knows the World was nearby.

“Hello,” he said.

While relations with the others had improved greatly since he had saved Touched by Fire, that had not been true of Knows the World.

The wise man had not been hostile; only distant.  Brooks often noticed him watching, and while he had tried to engage the elder in conversation many times, Knows the World had always left quickly.

Brooks knew that Knows the World would be key to convincing the tribe to come with him.  They trusted Brooks, yes, but if Knows the World took a different stance, then most of the !A!amo would not go.

It was almost as if Knows the World knew this, and was intentionally avoiding the conversation.

“I come to tell you of the blood hunt,” Knows the World said.  “You do not know our ways.”

“Thank you,” Brooks replied.

“We hunt in the night,” Knows the World began.  He paused, as if waiting for a response, and so Brooks ventured a question.

“Isn’t that more dangerous?  Shouldn’t we hunt in the daylight?”

“The keko!un like the light,” Knows the World said.  “They sleep less deeply in the light, and so we are more likely to encounter them on the way.”

“What of other dangers?” Brooks asked.

Knows the World folded his wings over himself to show an end to questioning.

“Prepare yourself,” he said.  “We leave once darkness falls.”

It would not be long, Brooks thought.  He thought they’d be going in the morning, but he could go sooner.

“Before you go,” he said, knowing that Knows the World had already signaled the end of the conversation, but was desperate to try.  “May we speak of something else?”

Knows the World looked surprised; Brooks’s behavior bordered on rude.

The wise man said nothing, but turned and walked away.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 56

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His thumb was bloody from a missed strike.

He’d shaken it out, daubed on a soothing rub from a si!o plant to stop the bleeding, and then taken back up the stone and bone again.

The knapped blade Brooks had made was misshapen, too thick at the base and too thin at the tip.  But it did somewhat look like the proper shape, by far the best spearpoint he’d made so far.

Tracker looked at the blade.  “It has a fat bottom,” he said, grinning.  “Like a hamomo that has grown lazy!”

“I could try flaking off some more pieces at the bottom . . .” Brooks said.

“No, no.  Perhaps I could, but you would break it.  Better to have a spearhead that is poor than no spearhead.”  Tracker mimed poking something with a stick, adding a squeal for the imaginary beast.  “Much better with spearpoint.”

“All right,” Brooks said, smiling at Traker’s impression.  He looked back to his work.

He’d been practicing every day for nearly a month.  After the coming-of-age ceremony for the two boys – men, he reminded himself – he seemed to be taken as truly one of them, rather than a friendly visitor.  The !A!amo had taught him about survival in their world, what plants could be used as food or medicine, their stories of heroes and monsters, how to make for himself a weapon in their style.

The dart gun he’d found nearly impossible; it was sized too much for !Xomyi anatomy, and straight scaling it up did not quite work.

But with a spear, he thought he could manage.  Historical sword fighting was an interest of his since his academy days, and he frequently sparred with Jaya, who held several awards from tournaments.

He’d selected an appropriate-length spear, carved a notch in the end, covered the raw wood in a sealant, even decorated it with feathers he’d found outside his tent one day.

Normally he didn’t believe in signs, but given that he’d been contemplating ornamentation, it seemed perfect.

Now he only had to do the most important part; set the spearhead.  For that, he had to have a spearhead.

The most challenging part was making the main blade, and he’d done that.  Now he was trying to finish the edges, chipping out small notches with the tip of a pointed bone, a technique he knew to be called pressure-flaking.

Humans had done it, thousands of years ago.  Now he was learning how to again.

Sweat poured from his brow, stinging his eyes, but he kept working.

The sun had visibly moved in the sky when he finished.  That had been at least four hours, he reckoned from the star’s position above, then checked his system to confirm, and found that he’d been close in his estimate.

“What do you think?” he asked Tracker.  In the time he’d been working on one, Tracker had made three new blade cores.

“It looks like it has a fat bottom,” Tracker said pleasantly.  “Will it fit on the spear?”

Brooks took up the spear shaft, placing the blade into the notch he’d cut.

Or trying to.

It was far too fat at the bottom, and he sighed.  “I’ll have to risk thinning it up,” he said.  “I can’t take off any more wood and it won’t sit properly if I leave it.”

“Like a fat hamomo,” Tracker said with a laugh.  “I knew it was too big!”

“You said it was big, but not that it was too big.  Could you have mentioned that earlier?” Brooks asked, not really upset.

“Better you see for yourself,” Tracker replied.  “Try fitting blade before finishing.  Just to get idea of how it fits.”

That was so blindingly obvious that Brooks felt humiliated.  But Tracker, either oblivious to his feelings or else simply trying to change the topic off it, spoke of something else.

“What is your home like?” he asked.

Brooks positioned his spear head, ready to make a strike that – he hoped – would make it thinner and more even at once.

He paused, considering how to answer.  He pointed up.  “I live on a rock in the sky.”

Tracker looked up, then at Brooks, his face seeming skeptical.  “You have strong keotli, Gift Giver, but I do not believe you are a spirit.”

“I am not a spirit,” Brooks replied.  “But I live in the sky, on a large rock.”  He considered, then altered his sentence.  “Inside a large rock.”

“Inside?” Tracker asked, surprised.

“Yes.  It is hollow inside.”

Tracker considered it, but clearly he found it hard to accept.  “Do you have success in your hunts inside your rock in the sky?”

“We don’t hunt there.”

“You don’t hunt?  How do you live if you don’t eat meat?”  Tracker mimed eating a piece of meat.  Brooks knew by now that the motion specifically meant to eat meat, rather than anything else.

“We eat meat,” he replied.  “But we do not need to hunt it.  We . . . grow meat.”  It was true; they grew proteins in the form of animal meat in vats.  It looked – and frankly smelled – horrible in process.  But the results were as delicious as any natural meat.  Better, really, Brooks knew, as he had eaten meat from animals before.  Vat meat also contained a better mix of nutrients for humans.

“You grow meat!  That is impressive.  How do you grow such things?  I would like to grow some meat right now,” Tracker asked, smiling.  He was not believing anything Brooks said now, but he appreciated the story.

Before Brooks could reply, the sound of running reached them both.  Brooks dropped his hand to his sidearm, and Tracker took up his spear.

Fast of Wing crashed through the undergrowth, stumbling slightly as he came to a stop in front of them.

“I . . .” he panted, “I have found keko!un!”

Brooks looked to Tracker with alarm.  They had just moved; the keko!un should not have followed this quickly.  They rarely came this far, he had been told.  If they were here . . .

“Fast of Wing,” Tracker said.  “Is it in deep rest?”

Fast of Wing nodded slowly.  Tracker rose, letting out a cry, raising his hands upwards.

“What?” Brooks asked.  “What do you mean a deep rest?”

Fast of Wing did not answer, but turned, running off.  Brooks looked to Tracker.

“Sometimes keko!un get very tired,” he told Brooks.  “They find a place that is safe, and sleep for many days.  But Fast of Wing has found its safe place.”

Brooks nodded.  Was it hibernation?  It seemed unlikely on a warm planet.  But he didn’t know keko!un ways, how they worked.

Fast of Wing had spent much time away from home recently.  Brooks had taken it to be a sign of mourning, but now he realized that all this time he had been hunting for revenge.

Tracker was still talking.  “With any luck, we will go to its home, tonight and we will kill it.”

A question suddenly formed in his mind.  “Is this the same keko!un that slew his father?”

Confusion came over Tracker’s face.  “It is keko!un,” he said.

The !A!amo headed back towards the collection of huts, and Brooks followed.  All of the men were gathering, talking excitedly to each other.

“We must go kill it,” Fast of Wing was saying emphatically.  “We must.  When it wakes up it will be hungry, and who might it take, hm?”  He looked to Good Hunter.  “A wife?  A son?”

Bold Hunter had wrapped his wings around himself, his face set grimly.  He said nothing, and Brooks could not tell if he was for or against Fast of Wing’s idea.

“What about your daughter?” Fast of Wing said to Tracker.  “Or your wife with unborn child?” he added to Diver.

“Ayah!  Do not put such curse on my unborn son!” Diver protested.

“But the point is well-said,” Bold Hunter declared.

“The keko!un are too fierce,” Tracker said.

“Pah!  Coward!” Fast of Wing said.  “You are Tracker, you should have been the one to find the keko!un’s safe place!  Instead I found it.”

Tracker almost lunged at Fast of Wing, but Brooks stepped between them.  “Do not fight each other,” he said, a rush in his blood.  He knew, without even having to consider, that he was one of them.  That they’d accept his stepping in, the same as they’d accept any other’s.  “Fast of Wing has found the keko!un.  It is the enemy.”

He did not know if he was for or against going, but he knew that they could not turn on each other.

“Your father’s spirit must have guided you,” Tracker said, wrapping his wings around himself.  “To find a sleeping keko!un is rare.  Only spirits can find it.”  He glanced at Brooks, but then looked away.

There was still that lingering superstition at times, he saw.  They still attributed all he could do to magic, or keotli, as they called it.  The drone that Y sometimes communed through was viewed as his medium to bring about his keotli.  They viewed it with awe, but since he had saved Touched by Flames, they seemed to think of him as a being of flesh and blood, like they were.

He wondered if it was because they thought he had been praying to it; he rarely saw them offer prayer, but at times they did chant softly to what he believed to be spirits.

It made him wonder again; in thousands of years, might that basic form of spirituality evolve into religion?  Would the !Xomyi repeat the human steps of organized religions with power structures, temple cities?

If the conditions allowed for it, such things seemed to repeat themselves ad nauseum across the cosmos.  Every biological intelligent species that came from an environment remotely like Earth and had humanoid qualities had gone down a similar path, stages of building, each slowly – and often painfully – growing into the next.

The only ones to escape it, as far as he knew, were the Corals and the Star Angels.  And, he suddenly wondered, perhaps the Shoggoths?

The thought of Kell rose a thousand more questions, ones that had been lingering in his mind since he’d met the being.  Questions he knew might never be answered, given the Ambassador’s reluctance to communicate.

Their last conversation still haunted him, but he was snapped out of that dark place by the !A!amo, who were still arguing.

“Knows the World will decide,” Good Hunter declared.  The elder was approaching now.

As he did so, Knows the World glanced to Brooks quizzically.  Brooks had no answer for him; Fast of Wing quickly told him what the issue was.

“. . . I must be allowed to kill it!” Fast of Wing said, his voice heated.

Knows the World considered.  He looked to the others, who spoke for or against the plan, but his eyes then came to Brooks.

“What do you say, Gift Giver?”

“I say that I understand why Fast of Wing wants this,” Brooks replied.  “But his burning desire for its death is dangerous keotli.”

A murmur of surprise went through the group.

“I agree,” Knows the World said.

“I will not be denied my revenge!” Fast of Wing spat.  “I will go alone, and kill or die, if I must.”

“I agree with this as well,” Knows the World said.  “Tell me; must it die by your hand?”

Fast of Wing seemed surprised.  “As long as it dies,” he said.

“Then your hand shall not be the spear that strikes,” Knows the World said.  “Gift Giver is right; your burning rage is too dangerous.  The spirit of your father still quakes with anger and it bleeds into you.  Once we have slain the keko!un, his spirit, and you, shall rest easier.”

Fast of Wing considered this.

Knows the World did not have any true power, Brooks knew.  It was entirely possible that Fast of Wing would refuse what he said, and short of restraining him he could not be stopped.

Which, Brooks knew, would not happen.  The others would not hold Fast of Wing back.  Even if, in Brooks’s estimation, Knows the World was right.  Revenge changed a man.

“I bow to your words,” Fast of Wing said.  “I will not slay the keko!un, but I will be glad to know that it has died.”

Knows the World nodded.  “Who, then, shall strike the blow that kills?”  His eyes swept the group.

Brooks had expected some volunteers.  But no one seemed eager.

He stepped forward.  “I will,” he said.

A gasp swept through the !Xomyi, and Brooks suddenly feared he had committed some gaff.  But no; awe came into their eyes again as they watched him.  Even Knows the World regarded him with wide eyes.

“It will be,” the wise man said, turning away.  “Prepare for the hunt,” he said over his shoulder as he left.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 55

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“Okay, just one more minute,” Apollonia said.  “I’m almost done.”

The man merely made a strange noise that echoed through the tube down his throat.

He was Zef, one of their engineers who had been sent out to check a line.  Along the way, he’d fallen on some sort of huge, fat mushroom.  People said it had deflated like a whoopie-cushion, which amused her.

But the huge quantity of spores that had been mushed out of it were less amusing.

They were not colonizing the man, thankfully.  Human make-up just wasn’t an acceptable surface for Ko’s life to live in.  But the Zef had vomited from how gross it all was, and pulled off his mask, breathing in a huge lungful of spores.

It was his allergic reaction that had been the problem.  Even if the spores couldn’t root, human lungs did not like breathing in lots of tiny junk.  Not only was breathing extremely difficult, but he’d become paralyzed.

A medical drone had kept him alive, but his body was strongly rebelling against that notion, and so he was here.  And Apollonia was taking care of him, even as his body continued the other normal processes.

Dr. Zyzus had thought it would take about three days for him to regain the use of his limbs.  He was breathing via the artificial respiration system inserted into his lungs, but the medications were making him groggy and confused.

His rear end was . . . well, doing what that part of the body did.  It seemed excessive, and the system kept telling her whenever it was imminent, so she was able to keep him clean.  But it was a lot of work.

A gummy arm had, thankfully, been brought down, and could help her roll him.  It was not a fine manipulator, though, and while it could safely move people in even the worst of shape, it could not clean them.

She had never realized just how difficult to move an actually-helpless person was.  This man couldn’t control his body at all, and she did not think she could even do this while trying to prop him up on his side by herself.

She had a headset on, with a screen an inch from her face.  It was oddly distracting and tended to get knocked slightly askew, causing the overlay to look slightly fuzzy.  It would adjust after a second, but it was just kind of a pain.

The man breathed out, and a puff of the toxic spores came out through the tube.  Not one stuck to its sides.  She was glad not just that it was contained in the tube, but for her mask.  The last thing she wanted was to breathe in mushroom farts.

That was part of the process; machines smaller than a cell were laboriously cleaning out every tiny part of his lungs, removing the spores.  When enough were gathered, they’d be brought out through an exhalation.

In the meantime, an external machine was acting as his lungs, working the exact mix of oxygen in and carbon dioxide out that a person needed to live.

There.  She wiped him again and it came back clean.  Her eyepiece also pinged that her cleaning was sufficient.

“Okay, we’re rolling back onto your back,” she told the man.

Dark, he had to be so scared, she thought.  Being helpless.  And even though there could still be a crinkling of lines around his eyes, he looked very calm.  Maybe the meds?  He seemed almost peaceful – accepting.

Once he was rolled over, she stepped over to the wall.  There were two sets of rings in it, one that she stuck her arms in to put on the skin-sheathe gloves, and the other to remove them.  The coverings peeled off of her hand in one piece as she put them in, up to the elbow.  Then, sticking her hands into the slightly-translucent other side, she got a new, unsullied covering applied.

Couldn’t keep using the old one, which was contaminated, she told herself.  Infection control was now indelibly stamped into her brain.

Going back to the engineer, she made sure he at least looked comfortable, stuffed a foam wedge under one side to roll him slightly on his side, and stepped back.  Yep, her checklist in her visor was all green.

“Rest well,” she told him, removing her latest skin-sheathe gloves, and turning off the light as she left.

Looking to her schedule, she was directed to another room, where Hawa was currently resting.  She’d broken a toe, and it would take the night to repair it properly.  In the meantime, Apollonia had to keep going in and getting her what she needed so the woman didn’t get up on her own and set the healing back by hours . . .

After that, she’d take her break – an hour for some food and digestion, then back to work.

She could study in that time, she thought, while she ate.  She had more studying to do after this shift was over, but it couldn’t hurt to look over things even if one was also eating . . .


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 54

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Day 62

Ten Days until Evacuation


Kai set her rifle against her knee, pointing it up into the air.  It wasn’t the best way to have it pointed, but an accidental discharge was supremely unlikely even if something went wrong.  There was just no other direction to safely have it resting, unless she wanted the barrel on the ground.

The !Xomyi around her did not seem to understand when she told them to be careful of walking in front of it, so she could not lay it across her lap.

A few times she’d even found them trying to peer down the barrel.

The women chattered amongst themselves as they gathered.  They took turns using the scanner Brooks had given them, and they had figured out on their own how to work it and even scan new items for it to locate.

Only once had they accidentally gotten into a sub-menu and couldn’t find their way back out.  They’d brought it to her, asking if they’d upset it, and Kai had shown them how to get back to the main screen.  Remotely, then, she’d disabled all other screens except the scan screen; they’d not have problems getting stuck in menus again.

When would they understand it was technology?  She had tried telling them that it was just a tool, like a spear or a needle or a scraper.  But they didn’t seem to understand it.

Or maybe, she thought, they thought those things had spirits, too?

Sometimes when a tool had broken, she had heard them mutter something about the ‘keotli being gone’.

“Does it ever get tired?” one of the younger women asked her about the machine.

The atomic battery in it would last at least 75 years before starting to get too low to run the device.  She couldn’t think of how to tell her that.

“Not for a very long time,” she told the !Xomyi instead.

Her name was Soon Mother, and she was very pregnant.

Their information on !Xomyi did not include how long gestational periods were, but Kai had a feeling that soon there would be a new member of the tribe.

Soon Mother rested often, but still labored.  Kai had asked if she would get time off, but the puzzled looks the !Xomyi had given her had made her realize how ridiculous a question that was.  There was no ‘time off’ when you lived at a subsistence level.

Though, she noted, the other women were working harder to cover for her.

The beginnings of society, she thought.  Wasn’t it often said that when people started caring for each other was when it started?

She also saw in the !A!amo the beginnings of sex discrimination.  They had far more defined sex-roles than in the Sapient Union, with only women seeming to gather, and only men hunting.

Their biology seemed at least somewhat comparable to humans in terms of the physical differences between the sexes – somewhat noticeable but not massive.  The women tended to be smaller, the men had more muscle.

For humanity, those differences had long since stopped being very relevant; muscle augments leveled the playing field, if one wanted or needed them.  Technology, and the society itself, had allowed for the ending of essentially all sexual crimes.  Such events, in a developed system, were nearly unheard-of.

While she had yet to see the level of sexual categorization and exploitation that had existed in human history among the !A!amo, seeing the stark roles was still a strange experience.

The women seemed to be taking a break, with the eldest woman, Old Mother, sitting down with the scanner.  Two other women, Fisher and Rock Finder, sat down with her, talking softly.

Berry Eater, who her system told her was married to the man Honey Finder, approached her.

She did not ask to sit, her large eyes just flicking to the ground, then back to Kai.  That was normally how they asked for such an audience.

Kai gestured with a flat hand, telling her that it was fine.

Berry Eater nestled onto the ground, looking up at her curiously.

“Are you married?” Berry Eater asked her without preamble.

But that was just how they were.  Kai smiled.  “No, never been.”

A ripple of surprise went through the group.  “You and Gift Giver are not . . . ?”

“No, we’re just . . .”  She considered how to explain this.  “We’re from the same clan.”  The fact that they still had the physical differences of their ancestors from Earth probably wouldn’t mean anything to the !Xomyi, she reasoned, so it was not that strange to say.  They seemed to have color and morphological variations that they made little note of.

Two of the children ran up to their mother, the youngest, named Flower, clambering onto her lap.

She absently took from a pocket some pale balls of a mashed root that had been dried.  The children both began to eat, and she began to eat one as well.

Kai knew she’d be offered some she could not accept, so she took her own piece of a similar-looking ration from a pouch and started to eat.

A sound from out in the forest caught her attention, and she looked past Berry Eater.  Old Mother was also looking out, but dismissed the sound after a moment.

The drones told Kai that a large, placid herbivore had been walking nearby, but they had herded it away without issue.

Predators often followed in the wake of herbivores, so she set the drones to a heightened sensory state, just in case.

Berry Eater shooed away her children.

“I hope that someday you can find a good man,” she told Kai, her voice kind.  “And you can have many children.”

Kai wasn’t sure how she felt about her words, but she smiled, and decided to take them in the positive sense they had been meant.

“Thank you,” she replied.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 53

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This deep under the water, the pressure was immense.  Far more so on this planet than on Earth, Kell thought.

The darkness, too, was total.  No light existed down here, making eyes entirely useless.

It took more effort to move, but that was all.  An inconvenience.  He did not need eyes to find his way.

Down here, in Ko’s depths, for weeks, and then a month, he had searched.  He’d found the mundane, deep-adapted life he had expected.

But nothing strange.

Nothing like him.

He’d checked crevices and places that existed on this world that would draw beings like himself.  Places of convergence, where pressures combined to crack reality itself, and let slip the barest hint of the true depths.

Yet they were empty.

For all of his time, he’d had an innate desire to know.  As soon as he had formed his first coherent thought, realized that to think meant he was not simply inanimate matter made to move, but life . . . he had wondered if there were others like him out in the universe.

Over the aeons, vast and silent, he’d gazed up, and come to understand the universe through senses more acute and wide-ranging than even humanity with its myriad devices.

They’d come to understand the nature of the stars, that there were other worlds.

But was there anything else on them like themselves?  Once-slaves to terrible masters, who had gained freedom.

Now, here on the first true world he’d visited, he had received an answer.

It was just not the one he had hoped for.

He was, it seemed, truly alone.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 52

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The heat of the day was starting to lessen with the fading of the light.

It was welcome, and Urle lowered his heat threshold.  He’d been worried about over-working his cooling units during the worst of it; the last thing he needed was a messy and difficult shut-down of his electronics.

The weeks of labor and limited maintenance were telling on him; everything still worked, but there was dust getting into parts of his system.  Nowhere deep, nowhere dangerous.  But it just wasn’t working quite as well as it did when everything had been clean . . .

Now that the shadows were growing, at least, he could set his internals back down to a lower temperature.  It was more efficient that way.

Stopping to wipe sweat from his still-flesh brow, he saw that a knot of Hessa were heading back in.  One waved to him, and he waved back.

He was well-accepted now, he thought.  They appreciated his help in the fields, and it was a good way to show them that he shared in their efforts.

Further out in the fields a handful of other loiterers were poking around near the edge of the fields of grass.  Sometimes they did that, hoping to take a lizard or find some edible fungoid things.  There was a strange connection between this seed crop they harvested and some edible fungi that tapped into their collective root systems.

It was fascinating, he thought.  The seedgrass that they’d been harvesting was not actually discrete plants.  He’d realized recently, while studying them, that they were one giant organism.

Their fruit were not even actually seeds, he’d found out.  They were simply some kind of edible growth, possibly even waste products to the plants.  He suspected that the plants grew them to attract the mole bugs that broke up the soil and damaged the roots of the fungus trees that tried to lock down the soil with dense mycelium.  The mole bugs did not harm the seedgrass, but would seemed to only eat the fruits.  It was a symbiotic relationship that was altering this part of the world; surely one day the trees would be gone, as they seemed to have no real defense against the mole bugs.

The Hessa seemed extremely tolerant of the bugs for this reason, clearly understanding their role.  At least, they were in the fields, but they would kill any that tried to come into the village and eat their crop stores.

It was not just the mole bugs that were helping the crops, though.  At times, the farmers would find areas of seedgrass with no stalks growing and dig down, cutting out chunks of the mycelium.

They often took out large nodes, whose function he did not understand.  But they would transplant pieces of root from seed-stalk areas.

They told him that this would cause that area to start growing seeds in future years.

He could only liken it to grafting, where a fruit-yielding branch might be attached to a healthy trunk of even another kind of tree.

Besides that, the Hessa did very little husbandry of the plants.  They had learned to manipulate a thing that naturally occurred . . .  but not yet did they grow them from scratch.

He tested his bag.  It was much larger than the ones the Hessa used, they’d made it for him, laughing all the while at its size.  He could carry as much as ten of them, they said.  He wasn’t certain that was accurate, but he could carry a lot, and it seemed to impress them.

Hefting the sack onto his back, he turned and started trudging back towards the village.

What luck, he thought ruefully.  They harvested for only a few weeks twice a year, and he’d come here during the most back-breaking period.

He really began to appreciate just how much technological progress had freed humanity from such drudgery-

A piercing scream broke his train of thought.

He did not realize he had turned, or that he’d begun running towards it for a few milliseconds.

His body had reacted automatically; not instinct, but his machine parts operating on pre-programmed reactions.

His conscious mind tried to take in what was occurring before him.

The group near the forest were screaming.  Two were running his way, while a third lay on the ground, the source of the screaming.

On her back, its claws digging into the bag she’d slung behind her, was a small creature.

It was like a small dinosaur with six limbs, black feathers covering most of its body.  It was thin and lithe, but its claws were large – and deadly.

There was more than one.  His system highlighted six, with perhaps one more still in the undergrowth.

He was moving quickly, flying by the two terrified Hessa who were still running away.

He let out a loud warning call; a klaxon, at a high volume, that he hoped would scare them.

The predators flinched, their gaze just lifting to notice him as he arrived.

Sliding to a stop, his leg lashed out, taking the one on the woman’s back in its sternum, snapping its body back and flinging it up and into the forest.

It would be dead from a crushed chest, he calculated.

As fast as he was, wild predators like this had lightning reflexes, too, and two of them reared, leaping at him in one smooth movement.  Their two sets of higher limbs reached out to grasped him, while their more heavily-clawed back-limbs ready to tear.

He twisted, one of the creatures sailing past him.  It flailed its arms, trying to grab him, but it could only rake at the clothing over his shoulders.

The other one he could not dodge, and his automated reactions kicked in again.

His hand snapped out, grabbing the creature by its long neck before it could reach him.

Its head snapped forward at the unexpected and sudden stop, and its limbs flailed, trying to kick up at his arm to slash him, but metal and carbon nano-tubes were more than proof against natural claws.

Holding the thing by the neck for a moment, he flung it aside, hard.  It hit a tree, but started to stir immediately.

There were more, though, and despite his actions they were not yet ready to back down.

He let out the klaxon call again, as they began to spread out around him, and they flinched.

That was when he saw that some of them were not surrounding him – they were moving past him.

After the other two Hessa, who were still running towards the village.

They wouldn’t reach it in time.

These animals, if they were bold enough, would catch them.  The villagers would then likely come back out with spears, and drive them away.

What drove these animals on?  His system worked at hyper-speed, calculating them, and the situation.

The feathers covered the creature’s bodies, hiding details.  But their feathers were unexpectedly dull.  It was not uncommon for animals with feathers to have bold coloration, and a good shine.  It would usually be taken as a sign of good health, even on Ko.

They were also much smaller than the !Xomyi, a third the weight of a grown man.

These were not normal predators, he thought.  These were creatures in desperation.

And there was an obvious culprit; the moon’s falling debris, though not yet threatening total destruction, was already changing the world.  The Hessa had commented how things had been changing.

So these animals were starving, desperate.

They would not stop just at scary noises.

A fraction of a moment had passed; the predators chasing the villagers had taken barely a step, and the Hessa they chased had not even lifted a foot in that time.

His hand dove for his side, where his sidearm was holstered.

Another animal leaped at him, and he swatted it aside with one hand, turning in the same motion, and aiming his sidearm with the other.

He fired twice.

Both predators chasing the running Hessa dropped.

The crack of the pistol firing went across the ground, and he saw the !Xomyi stumble, looking back in terror.

The animals near him flinched at the sound, so much louder and harsher than his earlier warning klaxons.

But they did not run.

He turned and fired at one more.

When the third one dropped, the rest of the predators finally scattered in fear, rushing back into the bush.

In the distance, the !Xomyi were on the ground, still frozen in place, gazing upon him with fear.

He holstered his gun, cursing in his head.  The !Xomyi hearing was much more acute than that of a human, and in ranges that the sound of his weapon would hit hard.  He couldn’t blame them for being terrified.

He crouched down to the Hessa on the ground.  She was not moving.

“Come on,” he muttered, feeling her neck.  Where was the blood?  The predator had been cutting into her bag, not her . . .

He felt no heartbeat.

“No, no, no . . .”

He rolled the woman over.  No, not a woman, but a girl.  She was barely an adult, soon to be married.  Her name was Fyyna.

He scanned her, looking for injuries.

There.  In her neck, the bones were broken.

It had not been the claws, he realized.  But simply the impact of the predator.  She’d been knocked down, and her own thrashing . . .

She was dead.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 51

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Looking up to the sky, Brooks felt a tugging, nagging sensation.

Up there, merely five days ago, the Craton, his ship, had faced a massive threat, and he had not been there.

Jaya had informed him of all that had happened, up to and including her talk with Admiral Brax and Ambassador-General Abashidze’s decision to stay.

He was glad, of course; that the Aeena had not attacked the Craton, that Jaya had performed so well, along with his response teams, and uncovered this horrible secret.  He was relieved that they would not be fleeing, that he would not have to abandon the people here whom he had come to respect and admire.

He was saddened, of course; five of his crew were dead, killed in the line of duty by the machinations of a genocidal species.  That the majority of !Xomyi did not have to die, that their world did not have to end if not for those machinations.  That all of this suffering could have been avoided.

In the past, humans had painted their enemies as murderous monsters.  Only very occasionally was it actually true.  Most of the time it was only a tool of the ruling class, a way of driving fear into people to get their consent for the most heinous atrocities.

In the case of the Aeena, they were still slaves to their own pasts; it was almost unavoidable, but sapient life had the special ability to perceive its universe – and to change it.  In this way, they could escape the traps of thought that had been honed to a fine edge by nature.

Humans had wiped out many other species on Earth in their history, some intentionally and many accidentally.  The Aeena had done the same, but usually with intent.

It was one of the few things that was well known about them, for they bragged of it; they had tamed their world by destroying everything in it that competed with them.  The predators on their world had been terrifying, its environment hostile, they had never domesticated animals and so never came to view some as partners.  They had become conquerors of nature and life.  Looking to the stars, even though they did not need to contend with nature anymore, they still looked at all life and saw an enemy.

Someday, they might grow up, he thought.

The !A!amo had sensed his tension, it seemed, and the space between he and they had grown more distant.

It was unfortunate, though.  They still treated him in a very friendly way when they did interact with him – there was no outward hostility.  But there was an uncertainty, there was something that had formed a wedge between them.

Perhaps tonight would help change that.

They were holding a ceremony, something important.  Knows the World had come to him and told him of it, as well as what was expected of him.

Just after dark, he would paint his body in red ochre, as would the others.  He was also to bring a large leaf, though its purpose had not been explained.  A bonfire would be built, a huge one, and then two of the children would become men.

Bold Child and Wants to Hunt were both on the cusp of adulthood, but as with many societies, there was a ritualistic challenge they would have to partake in.

He was not clear on the details of the challenge, but he would see it soon enough.

For a moment, he had wondered if he was expected to be intimately involved in this, or if he himself was to be tested.  In their eyes, he could see, he might not be considered to have passed.

But Knows the World had said nothing of that, and it seemed that he would stand among the other men.  Kai had also been invited, she would be among the women, though apparently there had been some discussion of that, since they had never seen Kai do anything they considered womanly.

Kai had been amused at that, but had assured them that she was actually a woman, and agreed to stand with the others.

The light was already fading, the hour growing late, though the intense heat lingered.

Thank the stars his suit hadn’t had any breakdowns yet, he thought, touching it.  The !Xomyi had teased him about the strange, well-fitting outfit.  They thought him foolish for wearing it, but he told them that he had to.  With his tone, they’d accepted it, his reasons not needing to be said – it mattered to him, and that was enough.

Rising, he reached into his bag and took out more of the red ochre.  Mixing it with a little water, he began to paint stripes over his face.

He was meant to tell his story in his paint, he knew.  But he was not sure how.  How could a life as complex as his be broken down to simple concepts told in a few images?

He did his best, presenting the Earth, with a crude arrow pointing towards a star.  And then from that star here, to Ko.

It was almost embarrassing, he thought.  Like a child had drawn it – his fingers weren’t exactly the best tools for painting.

He headed out of the camp, down towards the river where the ceremony would be held.  Along the way, he found an appropriately large leaf, cutting it free and tucking it under his arm.

The camp was near the river, but tomorrow they would be leaving again.  The Keko!un had drawn close.

Were the keko!un a threat to the !Xomyi globally?  The balance of power seemed entirely on the side of the Day Stalker, and given enough time might the creatures hunt the !Xomyi to extinction?

He hated to think of that.  But the keko!un were not creatures that seemed willing to reason; to discover how would take months or years that they did not have.  He might send up a message suggesting that genetic samples of the animals be taken, to see if they could revive them later – in a situation where they could be communicated with.

The smells of the water reached his nose, and pushing through foliage, he absently checked the drone network.  Nothing was nearby of note, save the !A!amo.  Good.  He’d hate for this ceremony to be interrupted.

The bonfire, the pile of wood half his height, was already ablaze.  It was, oddly, buried in the ground nearly a meter. The flames were intense and rising ever higher, though, and it would only grow more intense with time.

The !A!amo had split into two groups; men on one side and women on another.

Kai was already down there, and gave him a wave as he approached.  She seemed blind to the shocked looks of the !A!amo women, who were studiously ignoring the men.

He joined the men, who had their backs to the women.  Giving Kai a slight shrug, he turned away as well.

No one was speaking, but they were still waiting.

The rest of the tribe slowly filtered in, and when they were all present, Knows the World tapped two sticks together rhythmically.

They turned, men and women, now facing each other and the bonfire between them.

The two children came forward.  They were the only ones not decorated, even the other children had their own form of ochre decoration.

They approached Knows the World, who held a bowl with red ochre in it.

“Today you become men,” he said.  “You must dance with the flames.  Show it, and us, that you are not afraid.”

He reached out, making a single red stripe across both of their faces, just above their eyes.

The boys cried out battle cries, lifting their arms.

What were they to do?  Brooks was feeling increasingly concerned for the youth, though they did not seem afraid.

They both began to dance around the fire, and the adults on both sides stamped their feet, chanting, though his system could not understand it.

The others all brought out their leaves, fanning with them.  Were they trying to make the fire bigger?  It seemed silly, it was not going to provide a lot of help at this distance . . .

Then Bold Child leaped.  He flapped his arms, gaining height, and suddenly Brooks understood.

They were waving the leaves to give air to the children, not the flames.  The fire was rising, but then so was Bold Child, on the fanned air and the rising heat of the fire itself.  He nearly reached the height of the flames with his leap before coming back down.

Wants to Hunt seemed to have been studying.  He waited until everyone was blowing together, and jumped in time, lifting high.

Then the updraft above the fire caught him.  His wings spread wide, and he was lifted.

He did not fly; no !Xomyi was capable of that.  But his leap took him over the top of the fire, and he came down on the other side, catching the wind of the women there, who were also waving in synchrony.

Knows the World was there to meet him.

“You have done well,” he said, the words nearly lost to the cracking and popping of the fire.  “You have been one with the sky.  But now be one with the Earth.”

He had a knife, and as Brooks watched, Knows the World slashed at the boy.

Brooks jerked, shocked – but Wants to Hunt did not flinch.

The knife cut his wings, starting near his armpit and going outwards in a downward diagonal direction.  His wings were in two, blood seeping from the edges.

Brooks found his heart beating faster, but Wants to Hunt continued to bear the pain stoically.

“Go now, and be a man,” Knows the World said.

The men all rushed to the boy-become-man, congratulating him.  They pounded his arms, and despite the pain he now let show slightly, Wants to Hunt seemed delighted.

“Fire Leaper!” Diver called.

“Great Planner!” Good Hunter declared.

“I will be,” Wants to Hunt said, speaking slowly.  “High Reacher.”

There were cheers, and High Reacher seemed very pleased.

But they had not forgotten about Bold Child.  The group of adults all returned to their places, watching the other young man eagerly.

Brooks knew much was expected of this child.  He was the son of Good Hunter, and it was easy to see how proud the man was of his son.

Bold Child was doing a dance, grabbing handfuls of dirt and lifting them, then throwing them into the air.

It seemed to be getting the crowd more and more excited.  The meaning was lost on Brooks, but the careful movements of the boy, and the way he was letting the tension build was rubbing off on him.

“Go!” he yelled, in time with the others chanting.  “Jump!  Jump!”

Bold Child leaped, in perfect timing with the gusts.

He rose, gracefully, like a bird.

Cresting the fire, he tilted his wings, but not to the angle to bring him down.

Brooks realized that the child was showing off, lingering over the flame as long as he could, wanting to soak in the attention, gain not just their approval, but their adoration.

Don’t, Brooks had time to think.

Something in the fire shifted, the sticks suddenly collapsed downwards, sending sparks flying into the air that hit and bounced off Bold Child’s wing membranes.

He cried out, his wings crumpled, and he fell – into the flames.

His screams turned to a new pitch as he tumbled down the bonfire, down into the lower part.

Brooks found his body felt sluggish, but everyone seemed to be moving in slow motion as well.

Bold Child was still screaming, but he was on the other side of the flames.  Brooks knew he could not leap them himself, he would have to go around-

Kai dove in.  She came down just short of the pit, her arms going down into the flames, her face grit in determination against the heat beating into her face.

She pulled Bold Child from the flames, scrambling backwards.  Even from a glimpse, Brooks could tell it was bad.

The !A!amo women rushed in, their voices high, and took Bold Child from Kai’s arms.  They put him on the ground.

Cool River came over, issuing quick orders for water.  The women rushed towards the river.

Brooks could see that there were still embers on the boy.  He was breathing, but it was laborious.

Brooks approached, realizing as he was almost there that the crowd was parting for him.

They were watching him.  All of them, even Cool River.

The moment had come, he realized.  All of the distance in their behavior, it was because they suspected what he had done, that it was he who had rid the children of their fevers.

And now, they thought he could save Bold Child.

“Y,” he said.  “Emergency help.  Burn victim, !Xomyi male child.”

He knelt next to the boy, and before he had even lowered his face the drone came in.  The !A!amo collectively gasped as it did so.  They had always regarded it as something . . . semi-spiritual, and given it a wide berth.

It hovered over the child.

“He is badly injured, Captain.  I cannot help him without it being obvious,” Y said.

“Forget all the secrecy of before.  Save him.  Do what you have to.”

Brooks reached out, touching Bold Child on a spot that was not burned.  “You will be whole,” he told the boy.

The drone dipped in, an injection going into him.

“I believe I can save him,” Y said.  “But it will take all our medical nanites.  If you get injured, I won’t-“

“Do it,” Brooks said.

“As you order,” Y replied.  The drone moved in to rest on the boy’s chest.  He stayed there only a moment.

“It is done,” Y said.  “Give him time.  I cannot guarantee he will live, but I have done all I can, given the circumstances.”

Brooks stayed with the boy, kneeling over him.  He wondered if this was the sort of time where humans of past ages would have prayed.

He simply waited.  If Bold Child would live or not was up to him.  Shock was the enemy, and the child was deep in it.  He knew that the medical nanites were tailored for humans, and though their specific work in a body could be altered on the fly, their make-up could not.

This was not just curing a fever; this was repairing the body itself, a far more difficult task.

Bold Child took a deep breath, his eyes opening.

The !A!amo screamed, clamoring, rushing towards the boy.

“M-other?” he said.

Good Gatherer grabbed her son.  He winced, but it was clear from even a simple look at his wounds; they had closed.  He was not bleeding, even if his flesh was still charred on the surface.

“Your mother is here, my child,” she breathed.  “You are my gift, my blessing, and I am here . . .”

Knows the World approached, and the group grew silent, watching him.  Only Good Gatherer did not look to him, her eyes still on her son.

“He lives,” he breathed.  “He lives, and he has experienced the pain.  He is Touched by Flames.”  His eyes went to Brooks.  “He was blessed by the Stranger from afar, by No Wings . . . by Giver of Gifts.”

It took Brooks a moment to realize that Bold Child had just gained his new name . . . and so had he.

Giver of Gifts, he rolled the name in his head.  It should not be meaning this much to him, a part of his rational mind told him.  Yet he felt . . .

His knees felt weak, and he sat down on the ground.

He heard Knows the World speaking to Kai.  She was Reaches Into Flames.  She seemed pleased with the epithet, but it did not hit her as it had hit him.

He looked at the others, and they looked at him.  On their faces was love, friendship.  Was it worship?  He hoped not, he did not think so.  Something negative that had grown, a suspicion that they could not understand the reason for being secret, had come forth.

Now they knew, despite how strange he was, how far he had traveled to be here, he had come to help them.


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 50

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Admiral Brax listened to them with a sober seriousness that was nearly unnerving.

Four hours ago, they had withdrawn from the area of the moon Omen, pulling back to the diplomatic carrier.

After consulting with Ambassador-General Abashidze, they used the Craton‘s zerodrive to open a faster-than-light data channel to the nearest star base.

It was a stretch, nearly four light years distant, but they had a tenuous connection.

And they had given their report.

“When you told me that an Annihilator appeared, I . . . found it difficult to believe,” Brax said.  “But your data is clear.”

“None of us want to believe it,” the Ambassador-General replied.  “I have seen it as well, in our sensors.”

“It is still holding position near Omen?” Brax asked.

“Yes, Admiral,” Jaya said.

Brax frowned, looking down in thought.  “I would like to tell you that I will have reinforcements out there soon, but I cannot do that.  Assistance is a week away at best.”

“If the Aeena wish for a fight,” Jaya said.  “I will do all I can.  But the real problem is that we can either fight or carry the Ambassador-General’s ship out.  We cannot do both.”

“And doing either abandons all those teams on the surface,” Brax replied.  “It’s a difficult situation.  If you are fired upon, you do have permission to respond.  I won’t sit here safe and tell you otherwise.  But I suggest you act as if you hold a position of strength.”

“They must have been waiting just out of the system themselves,” Jaya said.  “I suspect that message that came from the facility on Omen was meant for an FTL repeater, and then they jumped in.  They could have a fleet out there.  We would not know until the light of them reached us.”

“I do not expect the Aeena know the disposition of our forces.  They can’t know what you have waiting just out of sight,” Brax said.  “However, I do wish your input; if need be, we could abandon this operation, withdraw all teams from the surface, and leave Ko.”

Jaya glanced to Abashidze.  The ambassador’s face was stricken.

They had discussed this idea – frankly – while they’d been warming up the Craton‘s zerodrive for this call.

“We will stay,” Abashidze said.  “I will make the call, with all repercussions if it proves to be the wrong one.”

Jaya hoped that Brax would not try to argue the point.  After their talk, she and Abashidze had been in unanimous agreement on this.

“Very well,” Brax said.  “I admit that I am glad.  I did not want to have to abandon the !Xomyi people.  I frankly do not believe that the Aeena will attack you – if they would have been so inclined, they would have done it immediately when they arrived.  Now the word is out, and to do so would bring another war.  One which I do not think they want.”  She paused.  “You have told me the basic facts, but what have your teams learned from everything you’ve discovered?  The Aeena clearly are the ones behind the mysterious constructions on the surface.  But for what end?”

“Commander Cutter has been modeling the effects of the station,” Jaya said.  “His report . . .” 

Jaya found herself hesitating.

What the Bicet had discovered was, perhaps, the most disturbing part of all of this.

“He believes that the pattern on the map observed by RT-1 in the structure they explored indicates that a system of similar stations that would be capable of braking the moon in its orbit.”

Brax’s eyes widened.  “Are you saying that the Aeena have caused Omen to fall towards Ko?”

Jaya nodded, swallowing.  “We believe it is the most likely scenario.  By braking the moon, it would fall into a lower orbit . . . and towards Ko.  Given a few years of firing the zerodrives, it would be possible to destabilize the orbit completely and . . . put the moon into the position it is at today, where it would begin to break up.”

Despite having heard this analysis already, Ambassador Abashidze sat down.  “I still cannot even countenance this idea.  The Aeena are . . . xenophobic and genocidal, but to do this . . .”

After a moment, Brax nodded to Jaya.  “Please go on with your report.”

Jaya replied with a nod and continued.  “In their final firing, the zerodrive stations folded themselves into zerospace.  I suspect this is also why they had the mercenaries on the planet, they must have been involved and could have revealed this scheme later on.  They were never meant to leave the world alive.  By putting the AI in the commander’s helmet and continually dangling greater rewards and bonuses in front of them, it could keep them unaware until it was too late to even call for help.  Once Omen crashed, all remaining evidence would be destroyed.”

Brax spoke.  “But the one base on Omen failed to put itself into zerospace.  It simply shut down with a partial meltdown.”

Jaya nodded.  “When my team found it, it was reactivated.  I suppose it had connections to a hidden transmitter, which called out to the Annihilator, telling them of the problem so that they could come in and fix it.”

“When they appeared,” Brax said slowly.  “They likely did not know you had people on the surface.  Perhaps not even that the Craton was lurking nearby.  They must have hoped to strike and destroy the remaining facility before we could find it.  If they had succeeded, we would have had an alarming event, one worth complaining about diplomatically, but never have known that they were the cause of Ko’s destruction.”

Jaya felt almost as sick as Abashidze looked, but she kept it in, stuffed it down, focusing on the facts, and her duty.

“All this just to exterminate a people who are still hunter-gatherers?” Abashidze said, her face pale.  “Why?”

Brax sighed.  “We all ask ourselves the same question – how could they?  But the Aeena deem all other intelligent life a threat and insult to them.  Now, or in the future.  If the !Xomyi had been left alone, we don’t know where they might be in ten thousand years.  They might have become space-faring and be colonizing worlds and systems the Aeena considered theirs by right.”

“If,” Jaya said.

“But I still do not know why this much secrecy,” Abashidze said.  “That one Annihilator could have destroyed all life on this planet, yes?  Why so much effort to hide their work?  It must have taken years and huge amounts of resources.”

Jaya knew the answer, but she looked to Brax, knowing the admiral had already understood all of this, and could say it better than she could.

“Because,” Brax said, “if their plan had worked, they would have had plausible deniability.  The light from such a moment will forever be traveling – and someday someone will see it.  I doubt anyone would have cared or noticed the small convoys traveling to a moon and made the connection that they had caused it to fall.  But if they had seen an Aeena warship exterminate a helpless species, they would know forever that they are an enemy.”

“Why the moon, though?  I do wonder that,” Jaya admitted.  “An asteroid a fraction the size would have worked.”

“An asteroid we could deflect.  As you said – we cannot stop Omen now.  At least, that is what I suspect,” Brax said.  “Or it may be part of their supposed obsession with moons.  We may never know for sure.”

She shook her head.  “The Aeena started their war with the Union with the sterilization of a Coral-populated system.  They did not know that the Corals were part of the Sapient Union, or even that the Union existed.  Since the war, they have learned a lesson, just not the one we were hoping for.  We hoped they would see that they lived in a populated universe and would act accordingly, not attempt such a barbaric action again.  But they only learned to take a new tact.”  Her expression turned even more grim.  “They will continue, I think.  They believe their result inevitable, no matter how many millenia it takes.”

Jaya felt her stomach heave, realizing that in some sense today they had beaten the Aeena’s plan.  All of their efforts to hide the fact that they were attempting to genocide the entirety of the !Xomyi people had been in vain.

Not that it helped the !Xomyi or Ko.  The world, and any life they could not pull off it, was going to die.

Brax saw the look on her face.  “Yes, Acting-Captain Yaepanaya.  I know what you are thinking.  But know that you did well today.  Your teams helped uncover a great crime, an act for which five of them gave their lives, the all of their hearts and bodies.  Today we won – and we will be sure to tell everyone else about what has happened here.”

The Admiral sighed again.  “But even victory here is not something that we can feel good about.”


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 49

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“The Aeena vessel is still not responding to our hails,” Shomari Eboh said softly.

The bridge was deathly quiet, everything in combat mode.

But what a combat it would be, Jaya thought.  The Craton was at every disadvantage; they were still extricating themselves from the moon’s trail, a predictable path.  They had to meet up with and recover their shuttles, which would leave them vulnerable.  And on top of that, the diplomatic carrier was present and completely defenseless.

They were at optimal range for the enemy particle cannons, a weapon against which they had little defense except being at extreme close range or extreme far range.

“Coilgun shots!” Smith called.  “They’ve struck the moon!”

“Are the shuttles out?” Jaya demanded.

“Still looking . . .” Smith replied.  “We’ve got them!  They appear to be intact, moving away from the moon on expected evacuation course.”

“Establish contact with them,” Jaya said.  “And keep trying to get through to that Aeena ship!”

The Annihilator was still lazily cruising, nearly 5,000 kilometers out from the moon and planet.

Its particle cannons were still warmed up, but the ship was not aiming towards them.

With even longer barrels than coilguns, the Annihilator had to be built around its terrifying primary weapons.  They ran the length of the vessel, all of that length a particle accelerator.

A single shot would reach them in less than a second at this distance.

The particle stream would punch excited electrons through the target.  It wouldn’t just cause physical damage, but overload and destroy computers near the course of travel . . . and each contact with an object would create a burst of deadly radiation that would poison thousands of people.  And the Annihilator had six such cannons.

“Captain,” Shomari Eboh said.  “We have . . . received a response from the Aeena ship,” he said, his voice incredulous.

“Put it on,” she said.

An image appeared on the screen, hovering just over the Aeena ship.

Jaya had not expected an Aeena to be on-screen.  The reclusive species did not show themselves, even if one must be in command of the Annihilator.  Instead, it was a Fesha.

Some said the beings looked like creatures from old Earth mythology.  Jaya did not see it in their crystalline bodies that were translucent to the human visual range.

The being was wearing a fine robe that seemed more fitting for some ancient kingdom than a warship.  But it was finer than any petty emperor of the ancient world had ever possessed, every inch of it a work of art, inlaid with symbols that she knew told the story of this individual, and a highly creative history of his people, glorifying their position as Honored Slaves of the Aeena.

“You have been seeking an audience,” the Fesha said.

Jaya’s heart was pounding.  Ships of the Union and Aeena had not interacted in decades; all correspondence and diplomacy was by messages.  What she was doing now, attempting to speak to the captain of their ship, was not something she should be doing; it was far above her pay grade.  Yet she had to; not out of anger, but to at least figure out what they hell they wanted.

Her hand moved in a command sign language, out of the view the Fesha had of her.
Contact the Ambassador-General.
Shomari Eboh signed back; they have not replied.

It seemed that the Entente was running silent on the other side of the planet.  It made sense; signaling the Craton would betray their presence, and they were unarmed.  That meant Ambassador-General Abashidze couldn’t even know they’d actually made contact.

“I seek to speak to your master,” she said.

The Fesha did not blink or even move in response to her words.

Which, she recalled from her classes, was their way.  They simply would not respond to, or even acknowledge things that they would not comply with.

“Why do you bother me?” the Fesha said, his voice disdainful.  “I am degraded by your presence.  On top of this, you dare to bore me.”

“You fired upon the moon,” Jaya began.

“Oh?  This upsets you?” the Fesha asked.  “This is neutral space.  We are free to test our weapons upon any uninhabited body we choose.  You have no standing to complain.”

He waved, dismissively.

Jaya bit back her anger.  It was the point of such behavior, of course.  Interrupting was another habit of Fesha representatives for the Aeena.

“I had people down on the moon,” she said, forcing herself to stay calm.  “You . . . put their lives in danger.”

The Fesha was slow in replying, looking disinterested.  “If only we had known,” he replied calmly.

“I was attempting to tell you this,” Jaya said.  “But you refused my hails until it was too late.”

“How sad,” the Fesha replied.

“We will be filing a diplomatic complaint,” she said.  “To prevent further . . . misunderstandings, I request that your vessel leave the orbit of Ko.”

“Why?” the Fesha asked.  “You are free to leave.”

“I have business here,” Jaya said.

“As may we,” the Fesha replied.

“Then perhaps we should set some boundaries,” Jaya replied dryly.  “To prevent any future ‘misunderstandings’.”

The Fesha smiled.  Then the call ended.

Silence reigned on the bridge for long moments.  Jaya was not sure what she could do except continue to recover the shuttles, and once they had, to pull back.

“Captain,” Smith said.  “The Annihilator is putting its weapons on standby.”

A tension lessened in her chest, one she hadn’t even realized was there.

Looking to the Aeena vessel, she saw that its weapons were all now powered down.  But it was also rotating, so that they faced towards the Craton.

“How long until the shuttles are recovered?” Jaya asked.

“Twenty minutes,” Commander Zhu answered.

“As soon as they are recovered,” Jaya said.  “Pull us back, out of range of their weapons.  But keep them in sight if you can.”


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Episode 12 – “Exodus” part 48

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“Captain, we’re detecting krahteon emissions from the asteroid,” Aminia Smith said.  “That’s . . . not good.”

Jaya leaned forward, looking towards Cutter.  “Could the zerodrive down there have activated?”

“Seems impossible,” Cutter said thoughtfully.  “But krahteon emissions would account for lost contact with teams.”

“Move us so we have a line of sight on their location,” Jaya said.  “Use direct communications methods!”

“Aye!” Ji-min Bin called.

It was a testament to the discipline of the command staff that they obeyed her order.  Line of sight for the teams would put them into the trail of the moon; where the most debris was.

It was not a position they could hold long, but there would be places of safety within it.  But such safety was relative, and their frontal shield was going to take a beating.

The ship shuddered.

“Two-meter asteroid,” someone called.  “PDCs got it just a dozen meters from the nose, pelted us with debris.”

“Keep up the defensive fire, but be mindful of the teams,” Jaya cautioned.

“Captain,” Shomari Eboh called.  “A coded transmission just came from the moon.”

“The teams?”

“No,” Eboh said.  “It is not using Union codes.  It was a tight-beam transmission, and wasn’t even pointed towards us.”

“Show the path,” Jaya said.  It appeared on screen.

It was headed out of the system.  But where?  There was no one else out there to hear.  Even if someone was listening from out of the system, light could only travel so fast.  It would take hours to leave the solar system.

“Can you break its code?” she asked.

“Working,” Eboh said.  “It is extremely complex.”

Perhaps it was originally meant to speak to someone far closer, she thought.

It took them precious minutes to get into position where they could see the teams.  The Craton took several more hits, none serious, but each one alarming.

“We’re going to need a new nose shield after this,” Ji-min Bin muttered.

“Quiet,” Jaya said calmly.  “Display countdown until we achieve line of sight.”

The countdown appeared on screen; only seven seconds left.

As soon as they got into position, Eboh had the line open.  “Teams One and Two, this is Craton.  Evacuate the site immediately!”

“We can’t stay here more than two minutes,” Ji-min Bin said.  “A big piece is heading towards us.”

Jaya could see pieces coming from the moon’s surface.  And highlighted was the position of the team.

“Maximum zoom,” she ordered.

The image appeared, and she could make out the shuttles of their teams.

“We’re getting an IR message,” Eboh said.  “It’s Commander Pirra.”

“Put it on.”

“Captain!” Pirra’s voice came through.  “The station zerodrive is activated, we’re pulling out right now.”

“What’s your situation?” Jaya demanded.

“Team One is preparing for liftoff, but the ground is shaking down here.  Team Two has a landing strut stuck in a crack, and they’re trying to get it free.”

Alerts suddenly sounded across the bridge.

“Something big is coming out of zerospace!” Aminia called.  “It’s – oh, dark.”

They all stared, as the object in question appeared.

The vessel was eleven kilometers in length.  It was a warship, one of a type that had not been seen by the Union for thirty-six years.

Annihilator-type Aeena Battlecruiser has fully exited zerospace,” Aminia Smith said, her voice soft, in shock.  “Armed with twenty coilguns and . . .  at least six particle cannons.  We’re . . . we’re no match for that thing.  Not any day of the week.”

“What is it doing?” Jaya demanded.  “Is it warming up its weapons?”

“Uh . . .”  Aminia’s hands were shaking.

“Cutter, tell me what it’s doing,” Jaya demanded, whirling.

“It is warming all weapons,” Cutter said, even his voice just a soft hiss.  “And we are within range.”


“Commander Pirra, an Aeena Annihilator has just appeared,” Shomari Eboh’s voice came.  “You are ordered to take off immediately.”

What?” Pirra called back.  An Aeena Annihilator, one of the most heavily-armed warships of known space, had just appeared above their heads?

How in the depths had that happened?

“Team Two still has a landing pad stuck.  I was about to send some of my team over to help get it free,” she called back.

“Belay that.  You are to take off now,” Eboh said.  “Captain’s orders.”

Pirra felt a surge of fury.  The Captain could not order her to abandon her people!

Except she could, she told herself.

But it wasn’t right, she argued.

She didn’t have all the information.  She didn’t even know if her people could get over to Team Two fast enough.

“Belay order to go out,” Pirra told Kiseleva.  The woman, two others with her, paused.  “Get back in your seats.  We’re lifting off.”

“Why?” Kisleva asked.

“I’m saying so,” Pirra snapped.  “Sit, now!”

She switched to Team Two’s line.  “We can’t send over help, Team Two.”

“That’s okay,” Devilleneuve called back.  “I’ve got two people out right now with shaped charges, they should cut the rock and then we’ll be free.”

It was a risky move, Pirra thought.  They had to have laser cutters, but those would take longer.

She felt her ship shudder, the engines roaring to life.  Thrown back in her seat, she turned her feed to the outside view of the other shuttle.

Small figures could be seen around it.  They moved back, then there was a flash.

“Ship’s free!” Devilleneuve called out.  “Getting team back in . . .”

There was another flash, though, and he cut off.

“Devilleneuve?” she called out.

“We’re okay!” his voice came back.  “Something happened . . . small explosion.  My people outside are down.”

There was a pause.  “They’re alive.  We’re heading out to get them.”

Another signal came through.

“Commander, this is Captain Yaepanaya.  The Annihilator is charging weapons, and they are aimed upon your location.  Get all you can out immediately..”

Pirra felt her heart as a hum in her chest.

“Devilleneuve,” she said.  “Belay that.  Lift your team off now.  Our location is being targeted by enemy vessels.”

There was no answer.

“Devilleneuve, this is not an option,” Pirra said.  “You’ll lose everyone if you stay.”

The line clicked twice.  It was not a voice confirmation, but it was acceptance, she thought.

Then she saw the second shuttle lift off.

A voice message came; it was from an individual still on the surface.

One of the two that she had just ordered to be left behind, she realized.

“We heard, everyone,” the woman’s voice said.  Pirra did not know who it was immediately.  “Get yourselves out of here.  Give ’em hell, and long live the Union!”

“Something big just fired!” Kiseleva yelled.

Pirra’s external view was just a flash, no true image resolving; even these cameras could not capture coilgun rounds, they simply moved too quickly.

The damage to the surface below was total; a full coilgun volley that left, down below, only a glowing crater.


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